+ Kairi et Sora +

awsome :)

i think its pretty ok. the only thing that seems wrong is Kairi looks like shes dead (no offense) and and Sora's are coming of the shirt looks weird. Ha, that's funny, the moon got ran over :D

No offence or anything but Kairi's really pale.

oh yeah and i forgot to say, the shading rocks and the pose is good! ^-^

well i guess you've already named all the flaws so all there's left to say is the good stuff! the poupu fruit looks cute, kairi really should be significantly paler than sora like you drew her, the moon actually looks awesome,their hair is really good(ihave so much trouble w/ both of their hair! esp kairis!), and i love how the colors are so bright w/o that even makin them look slightly out of place in those dark surroundings

weeeell, personally I have never drawn a kissing picture but what helpful criticism I can give is this. When a couple is kissing, one of them has to have their heads tilted. For Kairi the bottom half of her head looks semi-tilted but not so much the top. My suggestion is to find a picture where someones face position is the same so you can reference off that.

this is cool! i think you did sora and kairi pretty good! why would kairi be crying? i would be sooo friggin happy if that happened to me

what r u talkin about? i think the pic is cute lol!

Kawaii!!! I love this couple!!! Sora and Kairi forever!!!!!!!

I did a similar pic, except this is like the sequel (sp?) because there's actually some action in it XD I think it's rather cute, your coloring is awesome and the moon and shooting stars are nice. Good job.

Yup, I messed up a whole lot on this pic. Lol, but thank you for telling me what I did wrong, so I can ' improve ' And yeah, I kinda noticed that Sora's arm was a little out of proportion when I started drawing his arm. x_x;

Sorry kid, but you did kinda screw up a lot on this picture, don't get me wrong, I kinda like it! But the porportions of everything is off, but I used to suck at drawing too, I gotta get my new stuff up! Anywho...<br />
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Kairi's back side is like all ... flat, it would have some sort of curve, Sora's arm coming out of the shirt doesn't match with his shoulder, they're hands are really small, also a lil' short. But besides those, it's good!

why point out all of the "flaws" this is really good! i wish i could cg like that! your sora and kairi look original, you don't want them to look <i>just</i> like square's drawings! im putting this on my faves