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Sweet!

Enchanted to be light ehough for him to lift it? XD I love your art style, kida like spiderman or something Marvel-ish, although this is more anime than your other pics, (I don't mind at all ^^).

But the shading is of two different types, which is cool on a way but feels a bit akward in places - ie, his boots versus his chest - and the face could use a bit more shading. Also, the direction that the cord on his sword's hilt twists chages direction near the top, which technically couldn't happen, although I'm being very picky here. His grip on the sword looks a bit difficult to pull off as well, especially with a sword that size.

He looks young to be wearing armor and clothes like that, and seems very small in them. That is by no means a bad thing, it's a nice touch actually. The pockets on his belt are cool, and the detail in many places, (the cut in his glove, the cracks in the sword, the way the clothing folds naturally, etc. etc.), really contributes to the beleivability of the peice. Except for the huge sword, of course. :)

Nice inking and pencil shading (it looks like pencil to me), overall a great pic. Looking at the pic in general looks good, even if I want to pick apart the tiny flaws it's nice. I CAN see some not-so-perfect places, no big deal, though.

Just because I've given a positive reveiw so far, I'll list s few of them> :) Don't take it harshly, okay? Not much to list anway...

His right foot (our left) slants upwards a little as it goes outward, it's not quite level wit either the line set for the ground or his other foot.

As I said, the shading on the boots is rather bold in comparison with the light shading that covers other places.

His right eye (our left) is a little too small, even taking into account the angle of his head.

His grip on the sword. Again, I've already said this. Moving on...

The blade of the sword curves ack a bit, though it's only slight. If you can't see it, try covering up the whole bottom of the sword up to right above his head.

It's too good! There's no way you should be allowed to be this good! *is a whiney little immature brat* XD You're such a great artist! I'm still working on my art (and i should probably work on my critique, huh?), but I'm still a bit picky on other people's art.. sad isn't it. I'm probably just nitpicking, though. The better the art, the more I pick it apart. I'm sorry.

wow!!!!! I really love your art darks!!!!!!!!!!