Snape

OMG!!!!!!!!!! I jump out of my chair and nearly put a hole in the roof the my house!!!! snape scares me some times, and he is not my favorite character either. But in my version of harry potter he is my twin brother. Sirius is my favorite character......in my story he is my husban. But other than that its very good.

I like his curl
his face looks like it forgot something

love it to the max

wooh handsome :D

It upsets me how my view of the characters has changed because of the movies, I can only see them as the actors that play them now and it frustrates me. This however, is divine, I cant believe there isn't more comments!

Thank you all for your kind words! The movies changed my views of the characters too, and I find that rather annoying. For example, I think that many of the actors are way too old (Snape is in his thirties in the books, I think. Correct me if I'm wrong!), but I just love Alan Rickman - he may be too old, but he is so perfect in that role!

He he, I always imagined Mcgonnagall as a young witch in her twenties or thirties with thick framed glasses and a tight bun but no hat or long robes, Maggie Smith is the complete opposite of that...

dang thats good!

whoa, that is so good! great job, very realistic!

Ahh!! Ohmigosh! AAhh! .... phew....
Totally realistic! It seriously scared me... Excellent job!!!
I like Harry Potter too, but I stopped reading the series after the Goblet of Fire, because Harry was getting a bit too easily aggitated, and he complained about the dumbest things -- like he was becoming a spoiled brat. It made me mad, just reading it! So, I'll just wait till the movie comes out... Sirrus was always my favorite character!!! I like Professor Lupus too. Prolly 'cuz they're both canines. ^^ Anyway! Keep up the great work!!