Alarin Albatross

Alarin Albatross from my manga 'Magician's Circle'. This is the finished version of the lineart, and is Alarin's primary design. It's still under design, so if you have any suggestions you'd like to make to make him better (like how to make him look less like a girl, for one), then please feel free to let me know.<br />
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Here's a little info about Alarin.<br />
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NAME Alarin Albatross AGE 16<br />
RACE Human JOB Blue Magician<br />
HAIR Brown (later silver) EYES Brown<br />
MANNER Friendly, outgoing FEAR to lose those he loves