Bagman for clayscene contest

Like the title says, it for clayscence's OC contest! (she's from Deviant Art)
It doesn't really have any business being here, but it looked cool! So i thought I'd share it with you...

Here's the original description:

Now to describe my character. That's right "character", as in singular. Even though it's two guys in appearance, it's actually Antthony and his super hero alter-ego Bagman. Same guy, just different forms.

STORY:
See, Antthony lives alone with no one but his crazy, half-blind grandmother and her ten-thousand or more cats in a little suburban home on the outskirts of a city I've yet to name because it's not important to the plot just yet. He works at a comic book store, and is over-all a pretty normal guy.

One day at work, however, he gets a cell phone call from his grandmother. She tells him that her beloved cat is going into labour and needs support! Antthony argues that cats do not need assistance in birthing, but just cannot convince her otherwise. Finally, he gives in, and heads home early. He isn't too concerned about it though, and reads a comic as he walks...

Suddenly, a careless delivery van comes speeding through! The two never notice each other until it's too late...Antthony has lost his voice. He is stuck at the hospital with only one thing to pass the time: comics, and super-heroic ones at that.

Meanwhile, in the sewers below, two mosters known as "drain lizards" are fed up with the world. They're tired of being mistaken for brainless beast, or for the most part, simple alligators or crocodiles. Another Drain Lizard (as he is named) is the brainier of the two and makes an elaborate plan to get the drain lizard kind not only notcied, but shine their true intelligence as well; kidnap a human and hold them for ransom! With a wonderful and intelligently written ransom note no less!

With Antthony now recovered (all for the loss of his voice), he is now at work. When the day is finished, he returns home...to find his grandmother gone and a clever and well-written ransom note in her place!

Antthony panics! His grandmother could be gone forever! Finally, he gets ahold of himself. He remebers the two reasons why he lived with his grandmother in the first place...
One, was to keep her out of the nursing home, or, quite possibly the mental institution...
The other was to love and take care of her, and make sure nothing bad ever happens to her!

It was now that those duties were put to the test. He needed to step up, become a hero, and save her! But HOW?

Resting his head upon a table, he ponders...only to find himself looking at a comic. That's when it all comes together!

Taking up a towel for a cape, a bag for a mask, and some rubber cleaning gloves to top off the costume, he becomes Bagman, the silent super hero!

PERSONALITY:
Antthony himself is very dorky and is under the social status as a nobody, a loser, and whatever other negative word you could come up with for someone you barely notice exists...if you DO notice them at all. Other than to his friends, he is known for the most part as "the comic-book-store-guy" and is usually addressed as such. He is over-worked and under-paid. Whenever he isn't working at the comic shop or being Bagman, he's taking care of his grandmother or her cats.

When he's Bagman, however, things are a little different. For one, he DOES get noticed. Heck, you'd have to be blind to not notice a guy with a bag on his head running around crime fighting. He even gets a speck of love interrests...all of which would go down hill if they knew it were Antthony under that bag...For the most part though, he's just as lame a super hero as he is a person. He has no powers or cool gadjets, and is often mocked by every villian he comes across. He DOES try, but usually only ends up winning a battle due to dumb luck. When it all comes down to it, crime does not pay...but fighting it doesn't rake in much fortune either!

Just a side note: It probably needs a background, since this is a contest, but I drew them seperately, and haven't quite mastered putting backgrounds and foregrounds together yet...