"Tala, what happened?"- Vasilisa and Tala

OK you guys might be wondering what the hell is wrong with Tala. Well, i am thinking of writing a Beyblade fanfic with the first Beyblade team i ever created The Wildcards featuring The Demolition Boys, Bladebreakers, Majestics, and some other teams from the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd seasons. Anyway i don't know exactly when this happens but it's gonna happen in my story. <br />
Begin scene: <br />
*Robert's castle* <br />
Liz was waiting for Tala all day. He was gonna apologize for hurting Zal's feelings. It had been about 2 hours so she was getting worried and after Snoborg's episode it made her even more anxious. (Snoborg is her bitbeast and the episode she means is when Snoborg burned her hand and began glowing). Then she saw him, Tala limping inside the castle, Robert's butler panicked and went to get his master. "Tala, what happened?" she asked running toward him a look of confusion on her face. <br />
"Liz, he's back... and he took her." He then collapsed and Liz caught him. She gasped as she noticed something in his hand. Zalika's bloodied cat silhoutte necklace. <br />
End scene<br />
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So how do you like it i went lazy on the coloring and stuff but Vasilisa is wearing her G-Rev outfit she still has her gothic make-up but dresses brighter then before. I added my own twist to Tala's hair i hate the 2 long bangs coming down they look like attenas so fixed that, the rest of the hair is like that because the hair is supposed to look messy. I always draw the heads bigger then the bodies i hate when i do that, ugghh maybe i should draw characatures(sp?). I also couldn't find the pen i use to outline my pics and had to use a colored pencil. Constructive criticism is always welcomed flames on the other hand will be used for my own personal entertainment and any other comments will be loved. I'll always message back and look at your gallery also so don't be afraid to ask me to look at your gallery. Bye! ^-^