The tears I cry by frodobolson72

The tears I cry

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Seems like just yesterday
You were a part of me
I used to stand so tall
I used to be so strong
Your arms around me tight
Everything, it felt so right
Unbreakable, like nothin' could go wrong
Now I can't breathe
No, I can't sleep
I'm barely hanging on

Here I am, once again
I'm torn into pieces
Can't deny it, can't pretend
Just thought you were the one
Broken up, deep inside
But you won't get to see the tears I cry
Behind these hazel eyes

I told you everything
Opened up and let you in
You made me feel alright
For once in my life
Now all that's left of me
Is what I pretend to be
So together, but so broken up inside
'Cause I can't breathe
No, I can't sleep
I'm barely hangin' on

Here I am, once again
I'm torn into pieces
Can't deny it, can't pretend
Just thought you were the one
Broken up, deep inside
But you won't get to see the tears I cry
Behind these hazel eyes

Swallow me then spit me out
For hating you, I blame myself
Seeing you it kills me now
No, I don't cry on the outside
Anymore...

This Kelly Clarkson's song made me think about the possible relationship between teenager Snape and Lily(my favourite theory,hehe ).Even if Snape doesn't have hazel eyes.
But I think the whole song captures quite well what'd be Snape's feelings when Lily left him to be engaged with James.Poor Severus...!

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Category Books » Harry Potter series » Characters & Fanart » - All Characters » Severus Snape
Date Submitted March 1, 2006, 9:45:15 AM
Views 3996
Favorites... 41
Vote Score 8

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CRaYoNBoY on May 4, 2008, 4:02:18 PM

Holy cow! As I was looking at your drawing and reading the first couple lines in your description, I was thinking "hmm these lyrics sound familiar". At that exact moment the radio started playing Clarkson's "behind these hazel eyes". That was pretty trippy. No joke, it seriously happened. Anyway I really like your work here. You added some nice lighting especially with the rays coming in. A great moody piece.

Californiagirl on February 1, 2008, 1:45:25 PM

Omg, there is so much emotion in this picture! *fav*

Mesmer on November 2, 2007, 10:14:30 PM

You are incredibly talented! I love the colours you use, they are so rich and real.

RedRoses1 on August 30, 2007, 9:22:19 PM

This is amazing, its such a powerful picture
love it
poor severus lol
++Suzie
+FAVES

shiniqua on August 5, 2007, 9:59:51 AM

hehe i read the 7 book and that is practically what happens..not ecxactly but he did love her..it made me so sad..and this picture is beautiful and full of emotion.
~shiniqua

SpiritArcher on July 27, 2007, 7:46:10 AM

I do believe this is how he truly felt in the book. ): His whole plot in the story saddened me to no end because he wanted something he simply could not have. I cry thinking of him now. u_u

The scene does give Snape the feel of what he's probably just seen. James proposing to Lily from far away maybe? Or maybe he's come to the realization that he just can't have her. Either way, the break down of him seems so unreal. The scattered flowers really touch me but the light makes me think that there's something new for him. ): A beautiful yet sad piece which dives into what Snape feels. ):

ashbrook on July 27, 2007, 5:20:12 AM

this is beautiful..

luckylace222 on July 11, 2007, 5:38:13 AM

:D An amazing scenery...... *favs*

ExmortosSnapeBlack on June 28, 2007, 3:49:12 AM

wow.......thats sad.......i dont cry easly but that brought tears in my eyes. i love it!!

charlie9 on April 18, 2007, 10:25:51 AM

HOLY shoot ZOMG!!!! Thats so SAD!! ;-; And might I say, that you did the lighting and the shadows PERFECT for the mood you were trying to capture. Thats also a kick @$$ background (I wish I could make DECENT backgrounds ;-;)
Th at is al l. </3333

DFaetales on December 25, 2006, 10:50:01 PM

OMG that is awesome ^^ I think the lily/Snape thing is the best theory in the whole story!!

Love the picture *favs*

RavenDarkAngel on September 11, 2006, 9:08:44 AM

Wow that is awesome nice job I love that song!

WindowShooter on July 12, 2006, 6:03:11 AM

Wow, your pictures made me start to cry! *sniffles* I feel so bad for him. Omg!

yoshio625 on July 10, 2006, 2:52:53 PM

Wow, This is awesome!!! and coool!!
+Favs

RangerGirl on May 23, 2006, 11:07:54 AM

Wow... I hate Lily/Snape shipping with a passion, but this is really awesome. ;_; He's so sad!!!!!
*favs*

Puppzze on May 12, 2006, 1:15:42 PM

i'm not crying now, but just wait! i wil in a second! ='(
faves

Bad_Wolf_of_Hogwarts on April 22, 2006, 12:33:29 AM

ACK YOU'RE SO GOOD! It's not fair!

I love the pose he's in ... but my favourite part has to be the broken window ... thing. Lol. So effective!

Em xxx

NaNaNa on April 13, 2006, 9:49:02 PM

OMG! That's soo cool and beautiful! A real masterpiece!

Burtonite42 on April 11, 2006, 10:52:40 AM

beautiful work of art!
and i bet that's what happened.
*favs*

Goldeneagle on April 10, 2006, 10:10:09 PM

aaaaaaaaah!!! lovely!!!! CANT TELL IT BY ANY OTHER WORDS.... -speechless....-
i-love-that-pic...-

Tigereno-loves-Wolf on April 7, 2006, 9:33:59 PM

wow

very emotive work

keep it up
~Tigereno~

DC_wyverx on March 22, 2006, 4:38:22 AM

This is such a beautiful picture. You can really feel the emotion in it. Beautiful coloring job.

Lizabeezer on March 2, 2006, 4:30:13 AM

Aw. This is such an emotional pic! Even though I despise Snape, this makes me feel sad, just a little bit. Otherwise, beautiful job. I like the effects of the light coming in through the window and the roses on the floor. *applause* ^_^