Lips Almost Locked in Greed

Yeah, so happy new years everybody! To stay true to my usual rants, yeah, I'm not great at drawing real people. In fact, in comparrison to others, I can't draw real people to save mah life. But anyway, advice, praise, criticism, and all that jazz is always appreciated.

This is a scene from the Golden Compass. I used a pic as a reference, but didn't keep all the details in check, 'cause I'm just lazy like that. Of course this scene isn't in the movie, but it'll be in the second one, because my reference pic was a screenshot. So there. Oh, yeah. I guess it'd be nice of me to tell you who the characters are so, yup, they are Mrs. Coulter and Lord Asriel. Both property of Phillip Pullman. *sob*