Kasumi Manaka

Oh, by the way, Mangolious kiwi, You don't sound mean, actually, your cooment is very helpful, thanx!

Yeah, The proportions are WAAYY OFF. I drew this as some practice, and it was the first full body picture I drew. I noticed myself that it was kinda messed up, but maybe I'll redo it. By the way, I'd really like to thank DreamOfFire and unkown262 because you guys have been my freinds on this site and helped me a quite a bit. "sniffles in happines..."

I like it, but the porportions are way off. The head's way too small for the body, the arms needs to be a bit thicker, the legs look like they've been chopped off. o.o; Remember women are curvy and have a soft look to them most the time. A lil work and it would look better. ^_^ I'm not trying to sound mean or anything, sorry if I do.

I can help if you want.. where did you get the name? the head's a bit too small for the body but otherwise it looks alright I'll just say this.. I can tell a guy drew this.

nice pose!^^I really like her face!the hair is really great! <br />
for the anatomy here're a couple of REALLY awesome sites that can help!!! both sites are great at teaching proportions, and plus show you a much easier way of drawing!! here's one! http://www.howtodrawmanga.com/tutorial/tutorial.html<br />
and here's # 2! just go to the tutorials section! http://www.polykarbon.com/ !^^ I know they'll help! I can't wait to see what ya draw after you glance at them!^^ good job!

uuuuum the head is good ...but you should practice a little more on ur proportions and anatomy. and her neck could stand to be shorter and wider.<br />

Um, maybe you should make her arm a little wider... it looks quite weird.

the....anatomy's kinda messed up o.o;;;