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Prologue to my 2nd comic

Prologue to my 2nd comic

Prologue to my 2nd comic by icestorm
Prologue to my 2nd comic by icestorm

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icestorm
Here is how my story goes:

Darkfang dropped Fate's motionless, cold body as thunder cracked the sky.
"NO!" Jasper roared in terror as lightning lit up the bloody battle field. A cruel sneer crept up on Darkfang's face, he let out a triumphant yowl and whipped around, racing away, back to ThunderClan territory. He skidded to a halt as he saw a dark shape of a cat walking towards him, from ahead.

"Hey, what do you think--" Darkfang stopped in mid sentence as the cat edged closer and closer. Darkfang let out a low growl and crouched, he winced as a wound Jasper had given him started flowing out blood at his sudden movement. The strange cat saw his chance and sprang, claws extended. Darkfang froze as realized who the cat was, after all it could only be one cat, it was-- "ACK!" Darkfang screeched as the cat's claws slashed his throat. Pain. Darkness. Cold. But not fear, Darkfang was the most noble warrior, nothing would ever scare him, not even death, or his murderer.
"There are many secrets in this forest, Darkfang, which you know all too well, you should not have killed Fate." The cat rasped coldly. Darkfang gurgled as he tried to speak and collapsed, the blood and life draining from his thrashing body....

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Fate (C) UltimateYoshi1696
Darkfang, Jasper, and Mystery cat (C) me (not telling you his name)

If you steal these names I will murder you. Ask for permission and I might say you can use the names. But you have to ask UltimateYoshi1696 to use the name 'Fate'
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I would appreciate if you could recommend names for this comic/story.

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Category Books » By Author Name » Erin Hunter » Fan Characters (OC's)
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UltimateYoshi1696 on September 5, 2009, 3:33:44 AM

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icestorm on September 5, 2009, 5:15:05 AM

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icestormYeah, once I'm done with this story I might make one about Darkfang, with Jasper and Fate in it! :D

=DDD You'll have to wait and see!!! C:< lol! XD

UltimateYoshi1696 on September 5, 2009, 5:26:40 AM

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icestorm on September 5, 2009, 5:34:04 AM

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icestormlol, here is a hint, he will not be the obvious cat. Not very helpful tho LOL!! XD

platypusluver on September 7, 2009, 7:23:57 AM

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platypusluveromg sad! ;-;

poor Fate!

lol before i thought you meant Ultimateyoshi's oc Fate, I was like huh?

Falconlobo on September 5, 2009, 11:06:23 AM

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Falconloboawesome nice story^^

darkwolf333 on September 5, 2009, 9:28:29 AM

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darkwolf333ohhh i wonder^^