Stix word-in contest

Ok...so I did this on me compooper(read it the manga way...or it wont make sense*right to left*)...and I'm making a contest out of it...so, here it goes:<br />
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Who can put the best dialogue in?<br />
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U can either comment on the pic of the wording u think should be in it, OR, u can redraw it and put the wording in that way...3 people who do the best, will win!<br />
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1st place: Unlimited requests<br />
2nd place: 2 requests<br />
3rd place: 1 request<br />
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It ends: August 31...SO GET GOING!!!!<br />
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P.S. This is me and my friend Nami...Im in the black shirt, Nami's in the white.<br />
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PSS...I forgot to colour my shirt after the first panel, so I think u can figure it out...