GGA_Page#33
GGA_Page#33
GGA_Page#33 by leblackdragon
Description
Description
Do you think Millia is stalling? :)
Self critique:
I was too lazy to shade the first panel. She doesn't even look like Millia.
Second panel shading is not distributed correctly. Again, doesn't look like Millia. Note the un aligned eye level.
3rd panel fork was just added for the hell of it. It was supposed to be Baiken blowing hair out of her mouth in the gesture of none concern.
I'm very unsure of the 4th flash. Didn't know how to handle Millia and Zato in it.
The last two panels I'm content with, except for the background which look to sparse (a common problem with me).
Self critique:
I was too lazy to shade the first panel. She doesn't even look like Millia.
Second panel shading is not distributed correctly. Again, doesn't look like Millia. Note the un aligned eye level.
3rd panel fork was just added for the hell of it. It was supposed to be Baiken blowing hair out of her mouth in the gesture of none concern.
I'm very unsure of the 4th flash. Didn't know how to handle Millia and Zato in it.
The last two panels I'm content with, except for the background which look to sparse (a common problem with me).
General Info
General Info
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Category Games » - by Genre » - Fighting games » Guilty Gear series
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Category Games » - by Genre » - Fighting games » Guilty Gear series
Date Submitted
Views 1765
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Vote Score 0
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Trinity_Fire on August 28, 2005, 11:24:40 PM
Trinity_Fire on
oh, hush, this is great. ^______^- You're right that you need critiques, but you really draw better than other people here, i mean, honestly, no sonic, inuyasha, or crap drawer has half your talent!!!! Don't stop, keep this up! ^__________________^-Sol_Badguy on April 22, 2005, 9:36:58 PM
Sol_Badguy on
This is some good stuff. I hope you do concider to keep working on this. This is the kind of stuff people dream of doing. You've got a great talent and the storyline is interesting as hell! My only question:Is Sol going to be in this? (winks, Two thumbs up)
stuart_townsend_addict on March 27, 2005, 11:37:18 PM
I just finished reading all the pages... Great story! When will you be posting more???