Boku No Hatchi chapter 3 by luckylace222

Boku No Hatchi chapter 3

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This is the 3rd chapter cover with Hatchi once again modeling. They gave him lots of cut up hair extensions for this one. The fingers are pretty skinny; I apologize for my artistic ignorance! Now that I am so much more creatively and anatomically mature, I know to make them fatter! So fat...like breakfast sausages!

Everyone is having fun reading yes? Please criticize! Really! I am still drawing the manga, so advice on the plot line, sequence of events, and confusing concepts will greatly help! Thanks!
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Category Comics » - Original Comics » - Coverpages
Date Submitted December 29, 2011, 11:11:42 AM
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ZeroMidnight on January 8, 2012, 10:06:15 AM

I love the way those eyes look, those lashes omg~! x3 The background is beautifully sketchy too.

I do notice the skinny fingers, but it's not that bad. Looks like creative style really to me. lol *faves* Lovely cover!

Falconlobo on January 4, 2012, 12:20:38 PM

reminds me of a mood ring

kylaVegeta on December 29, 2011, 9:17:34 AM

Squee I really am enjoying this so far so don't fret. I'm not the best at critic... But So far every falls together nicely and everything. I love your art style I never seem to have a problem with mess ups in anatamy... As long as it looks good. And you my friend pull it off well. ;)

luckylace222 on December 29, 2011, 9:39:56 AM

;A; *cries* CRITICIZE ME DANG IT!

kylaVegeta on December 29, 2011, 9:56:10 AM

Waaaaaaaa ToT I am a horrible critic!!! I'm sowwwwwy!!!

aeris7dragon on December 29, 2011, 6:27:33 AM

mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............breakfast sausages.

IT'S KOJI OwO

Falconlobo on December 29, 2011, 4:21:16 AM

nice ring^^