BladeWings pg1

Well this is the first page to mi manga (not that it has many pages) its also straight up(i havent done anything to fix it or ink it mainly because i cant...-_-) bu tell me what you think^_^
 
what it says!!!!!(its read from right to left)
pannal1-
Mika:age12 mission:save the planet...
 
pannal2-
again...
 
pannal3
nia:are you still crying?it's not that bad...
nia:age19 mission accompany mika
 
pannal4
mika-why is it always me they never send anyone else?!
nia-ya know it may suck now but youll relize how lucky you are
 
pannal5
rico-MIKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mini pannal
rico-you almost left me!!
 
pannal6
nia-yup ignore when i talk...
mika-but rico iz mi friend!
 
end page! any thoughts?