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If i lay here

If i lay here

If i lay here by mechadragon13
If i lay here by mechadragon13

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mechadragon13
We'll do it all
Everything
On our own

We don't need
Anything
Or anyone

If I lay here
If I just lay here
Would you lie with me
And just forget the world?

I don't quite know
How to say
How I feel

Those three words
Are said too much
They're not enough

If I lay here
If I just lay here
Would you lie with me
And just forget the world?

Forget what we're told
Before we get too old
Show me a garden
That's bursting into life

Let's waste time
Chasing cars
Around our heads

I need your grace
To remind me
To find my own

If I lay here
If I just lay here
Would you lie with me
And just forget the world?

Forget what we're told
Before we get too old
Show me a garden
That's bursting into life

All that I am
All that I ever was
Is here in your perfect eyes
They're all I can see

I don't know where
Confused about how as well
Just know that these things
Will never change for us at all

If I lay here
If I just lay here
Would you lie with me
And just forget the world?


-Chasing Cars ~ Snow Patrol

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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
Date Submitted
Views 1097
Favorites... 3
Vote Score 3
Comments 53
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken and hour-thirty
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Zukoinferno on September 15, 2009, 8:53:05 AM

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Zukoinferno....... oh, God... tell me what's wrong Mish. please.

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 8:56:54 AM

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mechadragon13i dunno. i just had an emo moment............ i'm good now. will explain morez on Gaia, i guess.

Zukoinferno on September 15, 2009, 9:00:48 AM

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Zukoinfernoyou sure? cause i have some of these too and its not a pretty feeling.

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 9:03:30 AM

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mechadragon13if it was that bad, i would've drawn something worse. it's happened before, ok? trust me, this is NOTHING. but if you REALLY wanna talk, get back on Gaia. .....

Zukoinferno on September 15, 2009, 9:21:46 AM

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Zukoinfernook... ill be there if you wanna talk...

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 9:23:38 AM

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mechadragon13which i do.

Zukoinferno on September 15, 2009, 9:30:59 AM

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Zukoinfernook. ill talk to you about it soon as your battery's got juice again

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 9:47:21 AM

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mechadragon13i've got juice now. i'll be on in a bit.

Zukoinferno on September 15, 2009, 9:49:48 AM

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Zukoinfernoalright. send me a message when youre ready to talk.

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 10:00:19 AM

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mechadragon13just reply to the other one......

Zukoinferno on September 15, 2009, 10:13:40 AM

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Zukoinfernosame here. *hug*

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 10:20:32 AM

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mechadragon13*hugs*

Zukoinferno on September 15, 2009, 10:35:27 AM

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Zukoinfernoim making a vid that might cheer you up...

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 10:37:02 AM

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mechadragon13*ears perk up* oh?

Zukoinferno on September 15, 2009, 10:44:08 AM

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Zukoinfernoyeah. you wanted me to make it earlier. should be up by now.

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 10:47:49 AM

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mechadragon13? *goes to look*

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 10:48:57 AM

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mechadragon13nothing new's up. if its the have you ever, i already saw it. :)

Zukoinferno on September 15, 2009, 11:48:39 PM

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Zukoinfernonaw, its a different one. its probably lagging. for some reason ._.

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2009, 10:31:16 AM

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mechadragon13oh. well let's see if it's up yet...... *goes to check*

no, still not there..... try submitting it again.....

Zukoinferno on September 16, 2009, 12:11:19 PM

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Zukoinfernotried again.

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2009, 12:14:38 PM

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mechadragon13i'll check.... nope. nothing.

Zukoinferno on September 16, 2009, 12:20:35 PM

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ZukoinfernoFFFFFFFFFFFF-

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2009, 12:25:12 PM

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mechadragon13if you want you could try emailing it........ i trust you with my email, critic already has it.

Zukoinferno on September 17, 2009, 8:50:02 AM

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Zukoinfernoi dunno how to get the vid onto one ;(

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2009, 9:28:43 AM

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mechadragon13attatch it to the email. use a yahoo. :)

Zukoinferno on September 17, 2009, 9:57:15 AM

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Zukoinfernoguess ill try it >.>

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2009, 10:07:49 AM

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mechadragon13ok, check your pms for it :3

Zukoinferno on September 17, 2009, 10:12:48 AM

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Zukoinfernokaaaaay :D

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2009, 12:27:13 PM

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mechadragon13guess i'll have to wait. i'll be gone most of tomorrow anyway, im goin' on a field trip to the ART INSTITUTE. :3 dont get back 'till around 6-ish. my time.

Zukoinferno on September 17, 2009, 12:30:01 PM

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Zukoinfernogood, cause i get home around that time :3

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2009, 12:48:29 PM

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mechadragon13FUN--- wait, when do you get out of school? we're only 2 hours difference.

Zukoinferno on September 23, 2009, 1:03:47 PM

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Zukoinferno2:55. lawl. the poor little middle schoolers dont have ac :P.

Tinner1214 on September 17, 2009, 6:15:07 AM

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Tinner1214This is good... Just a little, i dunno, off of a perfect ten for the perspective...

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2009, 6:51:07 AM

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mechadragon13details plz? whats wrong with the perspective?

Tinner1214 on September 17, 2009, 7:53:34 AM

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Tinner1214I can't put my finger on it... It almost seems like, if it was a photo, the camera's just a little too close to her.
There's something just slightly off about the curve of her hips and that of the other two curves higher up... The overalls ride a little too high, they should be a couple inches lower if body proportions were right.

There's something else, but I can't put my finger on it. It's still a pretty sweet pic, much better than what I can do.

The tinman gives you a 7.8 of 10

Tinner1214 on September 17, 2009, 7:54:48 AM

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Tinner1214Maybe, when arms are upstrecthed, the tendons pull the skin and things near the skin upwards, too... Nevermind.

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2009, 9:00:44 AM

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mechadragon13well, she's wearing a long-sleeve shirt so maybe that's your issue with the arms.... and since mobians have different proportions from humans, (shorter and somewhat stockier), that's probably what has you all mixeded up. they have no visible necks, so that's probably why you think the overalls are in the wrong place.

BlazingKeyblade on September 14, 2009, 2:33:11 PM

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BlazingKeybladeThis looks so amazing =3 I love the shading <3 And the song fits the picture perfectly <3 Definitly a fave :3

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2009, 9:19:12 PM

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mechadragon13thanks SOOOOOO much, blaze. :3

BlazingKeyblade on September 15, 2009, 11:52:13 AM

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BlazingKeybladeAnytime :3

firehead on September 15, 2009, 11:29:46 AM

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fireheadHmm, this is very nice. And the lines look clean and neat.
You pulled off this pic very smooth, great job. All I see is the legs near the very bottom, unless she's crossing her legs. :P

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 11:38:36 AM

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mechadragon13thanks, forehead. and yeah, she IS crossing her legs. :)

firehead on September 15, 2009, 11:40:25 AM

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fireheadAh ok.

Then there are no errors I see. :]

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 11:41:50 AM

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mechadragon13thanks a lot, firehead. :D

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2009, 12:14:53 PM

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TheGameArtCriticfffffff

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2009, 12:53:44 PM

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mechadragon13stop it........ please.......

TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2009, 9:25:30 AM

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TheGameArtCriticFFFFFFFFFF

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2009, 9:47:44 AM

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mechadragon13STOP IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Falconlobo on September 14, 2009, 12:34:47 PM

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Falconlobonice pose ears eyes shading and angle

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2009, 12:54:15 PM

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mechadragon13thanks, lobo.

Falconlobo on September 15, 2009, 9:27:21 AM

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Falconlobonp

SilentSoul on September 14, 2009, 12:53:35 PM

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SilentSoulAgreed!

*points with shock* A CHEST!

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2009, 12:54:41 PM

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mechadragon13hahaha.... i know, right? crazy.