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Character Sheet - Jexanoda

Character Sheet - Jexanoda

Character Sheet - Jexanoda by mechadragon13
Character Sheet - Jexanoda by mechadragon13

Description

Description
mechadragon13
A Nobody. :3 GOD i wished i had gotten to color in the action pose before the deadline DX

Name: Jexanoda
Nickname: Jex

Element: Shatter
Proof of Existence: The Swift Ravager
Brief description Of element Use: Can shatter solid objects for both offensive and defensive purposes: to destroy obstacles, to injure enemies, or to cause a distraction. There is a limit as to how much she can shatter within a certain amount of time, how large of an object she can shatter, and what materials she can break, I.E. Glass and wood are easy, metals such as steel are much harder. (Note: she cannot shatter living beings.)
Weapon: Curved Spear
Homeworld: Atlantis

Personality: An intelligent warrior that usually runs on instinct. It is hard to gain her trust, but when you do, she will defend you to the end. She can be brutally honest with her opinions, and has been known to upset many with her words. She is not easily provoked, but she'll never back down on a fight. She is an honorable fighter though, and she never shatters her opponent's weapons. She hates it when people try to touch her atlantean crystal-- because it's the closest thing she has to a heart.


My application for Organization Infinity. Wish me luck!! ^^;

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Category Games » - by Publisher » Square-Enix » Kingdom Hearts series » Fan Characters (OC's)
Date Submitted
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Favorites... 6
Vote Score 5
Comments 25
Media Digital drawing or painting
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Zukoinferno on February 22, 2010, 8:17:11 AM

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ZukoinfernoWhy is it that Critic always beats me to the critique part? D: I feel left out </3

But I really don't see what the big deal is with the skin color. It looks fine to me, and I've actually seen the movie <:/

But I do think you need to work on her figure. Her hips seem too strait to me (Sorry if you took that the wrong way XD)

mechadragon13 on February 22, 2010, 8:20:50 AM

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mechadragon13lol, its just cuz you're not on as often XD

no, it should be a bit darker... again, i blame my monitor DX

HIPS?? STRAIGHT?? WHAT IS THIS?? my sis and mom were telling me her hips were sticking out TOO MUCH... XD

TheGameArtCritic on February 22, 2010, 8:22:00 AM

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TheGameArtCriticI think the hips are just fine, personally. :/

Zukoinferno on February 22, 2010, 8:49:46 AM

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ZukoinfernoI think it's just cause I'm a guy ^^;

TheGameArtCritic on February 22, 2010, 11:36:59 AM

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TheGameArtCriticpfffff... XD

TheGameArtCritic on February 21, 2010, 12:03:56 PM

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TheGameArtCriticI HAVE, BEFORE I COMPLIMENT, TWO PROBLEMS WITH THIS PICTURE.

1. Her head is too small. No, really. It is. You need to make it longer in order for the brain to fit in there (like, take a look at an anatomy book, or something - I recommend Hogarth)

2. She's too... white. I AM NOT BEING RACIST. Look at this pic of Kida:

http://www.steveenglehart.com/Animation/Animation%20images/princess_kida.gif

See what I mean? Jex looks more like a tan American. She's supposed to look like a Native American.

OK, NOW THE GOOD PARTS

Her design is very creative, and well thought out. I like how you took the Org cloak, and manipulated it to fit the character (though I think Mansex wouldn't have appreciated it :P) I also really like the weapon. Definetally better than the axe-scythes that Erscuro has. XD

mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 12:48:39 PM

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mechadragon13......GODDAMN MY STUPID DESK! it's too tall and it tilts the monitor funny so i'm slightly lower than i should be and it makes everything DARKERRRRRRRRRR!!! GRRRRRRR!!

also, i noticed the head thing after i was halfway done coloring her, and it was too close to the deadline to change it DX

I want her weapon :3 it actually turned out good in spite of it being rushed. And about the cloak, yeah i changed it just a bit, but that's cuz every other member in Org.Infinity changed it too XD btw, Mansex wouldn't mind cuz he no longer exists ._.

Btw, have i ever told you how much i appreciate the fact that you're a critic? your one comment helps me more than a million "omg that's awesome"s x3 *hugs*

TheGameArtCritic on February 21, 2010, 1:16:14 PM

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TheGameArtCriticglad to help :3 *hugs back*

pichu610 on February 21, 2010, 12:46:22 PM

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pichu610Where's the basic info for the tourney? Like:
Height, Weight, Age, Reason for joining, Three Weaknesses, and Three Strengths?

mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 12:53:24 PM

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mechadragon13oh snap. grrrrr. i'll have to add that in tomorrow, i'm getting kicked off DX

pichu610 on February 21, 2010, 12:56:40 PM

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pichu610Thats fine, just make sure you do please :3
otherwise, great job!

BlazingKeyblade on February 21, 2010, 10:43:17 AM

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BlazingKeybladeWow o.o freaking amazing =3 Very interesting character indeed :P I really like the weapon and character design =3 *Faves* :3

mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 11:28:57 AM

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mechadragon13thanks ^^

BlazingKeyblade on February 21, 2010, 11:37:04 AM

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BlazingKeybladeNo fuking problem =3

VictoriaZepeda on February 21, 2010, 11:08:45 AM

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VictoriaZepedaVery nice

mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 11:29:09 AM

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mechadragon13thank you :D

FeralFatale1207 on February 21, 2010, 9:49:03 AM

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FeralFatale1207Heh, very good job on the overall character design!!!!

mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 10:30:44 AM

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mechadragon13thatnks, fatale! :3

SaikieChan on February 21, 2010, 8:35:45 AM

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SaikieChanAwesome!~ I love love love her spear. <3
Good luck!~

mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 10:28:40 AM

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mechadragon13lol i want that spear XD thanks :)

Falconlobo on February 21, 2010, 8:27:25 AM

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Falconlobocool nice outfits poses and hair

mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 10:21:48 AM

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mechadragon13thanks ^^

Falconlobo on February 21, 2010, 10:26:56 AM

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Falconlobonp

killerrabbit05 on February 21, 2010, 8:15:07 AM

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killerrabbit05That's a pretty cool nobody design! I love the tattoos, too!
Haha, at first, I was gonna say, "It looks just like the Atlanteans from the Disney movie!" But then it was included in the description that she's from Atlantis. :P
Anyways, neat design!

mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 10:21:16 AM

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mechadragon13good, it's supposed to be obvious she's from atlantis. yussss.

thank ya :D