Character Sheet - Jexanoda
Character Sheet - Jexanoda
Character Sheet - Jexanoda by mechadragon13
Description
Description
A Nobody. :3 GOD i wished i had gotten to color in the action pose before the deadline DX
Name: Jexanoda
Nickname: Jex
Element: Shatter
Proof of Existence: The Swift Ravager
Brief description Of element Use: Can shatter solid objects for both offensive and defensive purposes: to destroy obstacles, to injure enemies, or to cause a distraction. There is a limit as to how much she can shatter within a certain amount of time, how large of an object she can shatter, and what materials she can break, I.E. Glass and wood are easy, metals such as steel are much harder. (Note: she cannot shatter living beings.)
Weapon: Curved Spear
Homeworld: Atlantis
Personality: An intelligent warrior that usually runs on instinct. It is hard to gain her trust, but when you do, she will defend you to the end. She can be brutally honest with her opinions, and has been known to upset many with her words. She is not easily provoked, but she'll never back down on a fight. She is an honorable fighter though, and she never shatters her opponent's weapons. She hates it when people try to touch her atlantean crystal-- because it's the closest thing she has to a heart.
My application for Organization Infinity. Wish me luck!! ^^;
Name: Jexanoda
Nickname: Jex
Element: Shatter
Proof of Existence: The Swift Ravager
Brief description Of element Use: Can shatter solid objects for both offensive and defensive purposes: to destroy obstacles, to injure enemies, or to cause a distraction. There is a limit as to how much she can shatter within a certain amount of time, how large of an object she can shatter, and what materials she can break, I.E. Glass and wood are easy, metals such as steel are much harder. (Note: she cannot shatter living beings.)
Weapon: Curved Spear
Homeworld: Atlantis
Personality: An intelligent warrior that usually runs on instinct. It is hard to gain her trust, but when you do, she will defend you to the end. She can be brutally honest with her opinions, and has been known to upset many with her words. She is not easily provoked, but she'll never back down on a fight. She is an honorable fighter though, and she never shatters her opponent's weapons. She hates it when people try to touch her atlantean crystal-- because it's the closest thing she has to a heart.
My application for Organization Infinity. Wish me luck!! ^^;
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Category Games » - by Publisher » Square-Enix » Kingdom Hearts series » Fan Characters (OC's)
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Category Games » - by Publisher » Square-Enix » Kingdom Hearts series » Fan Characters (OC's)
Date Submitted
Views 1840
Favorites... 6
Vote Score 5
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Zukoinferno on February 22, 2010, 8:17:11 AM
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mechadragon13 on February 22, 2010, 8:20:50 AM
TheGameArtCritic on February 22, 2010, 8:22:00 AM
Zukoinferno on February 22, 2010, 8:49:46 AM
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TheGameArtCritic on February 22, 2010, 11:36:59 AM
TheGameArtCritic on February 21, 2010, 12:03:56 PM
I HAVE, BEFORE I COMPLIMENT, TWO PROBLEMS WITH THIS PICTURE.
1. Her head is too small. No, really. It is. You need to make it longer in order for the brain to fit in there (like, take a look at an anatomy book, or something - I recommend Hogarth)
2. She's too... white. I AM NOT BEING RACIST. Look at this pic of Kida:
http://www.steveenglehart.com/Animation/Animation%20images/princess_kida.gif
See what I mean? Jex looks more like a tan American. She's supposed to look like a Native American.
OK, NOW THE GOOD PARTS
Her design is very creative, and well thought out. I like how you took the Org cloak, and manipulated it to fit the character (though I think Mansex wouldn't have appreciated it :P) I also really like the weapon. Definetally better than the axe-scythes that Erscuro has. XD
1. Her head is too small. No, really. It is. You need to make it longer in order for the brain to fit in there (like, take a look at an anatomy book, or something - I recommend Hogarth)
2. She's too... white. I AM NOT BEING RACIST. Look at this pic of Kida:
http://www.steveenglehart.com/Animation/Animation%20images/princess_kida.gif
See what I mean? Jex looks more like a tan American. She's supposed to look like a Native American.
OK, NOW THE GOOD PARTS
Her design is very creative, and well thought out. I like how you took the Org cloak, and manipulated it to fit the character (though I think Mansex wouldn't have appreciated it :P) I also really like the weapon. Definetally better than the axe-scythes that Erscuro has. XD
mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 12:48:39 PM
......GODDAMN MY STUPID DESK! it's too tall and it tilts the monitor funny so i'm slightly lower than i should be and it makes everything DARKERRRRRRRRRR!!! GRRRRRRR!!
also, i noticed the head thing after i was halfway done coloring her, and it was too close to the deadline to change it DX
I want her weapon :3 it actually turned out good in spite of it being rushed. And about the cloak, yeah i changed it just a bit, but that's cuz every other member in Org.Infinity changed it too XD btw, Mansex wouldn't mind cuz he no longer exists ._.
Btw, have i ever told you how much i appreciate the fact that you're a critic? your one comment helps me more than a million "omg that's awesome"s x3 *hugs*
also, i noticed the head thing after i was halfway done coloring her, and it was too close to the deadline to change it DX
I want her weapon :3 it actually turned out good in spite of it being rushed. And about the cloak, yeah i changed it just a bit, but that's cuz every other member in Org.Infinity changed it too XD btw, Mansex wouldn't mind cuz he no longer exists ._.
Btw, have i ever told you how much i appreciate the fact that you're a critic? your one comment helps me more than a million "omg that's awesome"s x3 *hugs*
TheGameArtCritic on February 21, 2010, 1:16:14 PM
pichu610 on February 21, 2010, 12:46:22 PM
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mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 12:53:24 PM
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BlazingKeyblade on February 21, 2010, 10:43:17 AM
mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 11:28:57 AM
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VictoriaZepeda on February 21, 2010, 11:08:45 AM
mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 11:29:09 AM
FeralFatale1207 on February 21, 2010, 9:49:03 AM
mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 10:30:44 AM
SaikieChan on February 21, 2010, 8:35:45 AM
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mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 10:28:40 AM
Falconlobo on February 21, 2010, 8:27:25 AM
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mechadragon13 on February 21, 2010, 10:21:48 AM
Falconlobo on February 21, 2010, 10:26:56 AM
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But I really don't see what the big deal is with the skin color. It looks fine to me, and I've actually seen the movie <:/
But I do think you need to work on her figure. Her hips seem too strait to me (Sorry if you took that the wrong way XD)