It's not her anymore...
It's not her anymore...
It's not her anymore... by melina678
Description
Description
After listening to a ton of Within Temptation, I was inspired to make a scene from my story Heart of Ice, Eyes of Fire. This is based on the scene when you (the oc) goes into Faceless Demon mode for the very first time. This is from Itachi's point of view. Here's the scene:
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He stared in complete and utter shock as the fire practically engulfed you. This couldn't be you...it can't be. This power that you had...it was truly amazing. He had never seen power like this. He watched as the fire fulled covered you. He wanted to stand up and help you, but his legs wouldn't move. Suddenly, the fire ball burst open, making him cover his eyes for protection. He looked up again and felt his jaw drop slightly.
Your hair...was now almost waist length. It was black with red streaks running through it. Your eyes were covered with your long bangs and your teeth could be seen out of your smirk. They were all long and pointed. Your nails were ruby red and they looked like they could cut through anything. On your back were two huge dragon-like wings, sharp spikes protuding out of the ends of each of them.
Your whole eyes...pupil and all...were a brilliant ruby red.
This wasn't even you anymore. This was something else. This was someone else. This wasn't you...this was Akako.
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That of course is only a small portion to the chapter, but it's still my favorite part ^_^
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He stared in complete and utter shock as the fire practically engulfed you. This couldn't be you...it can't be. This power that you had...it was truly amazing. He had never seen power like this. He watched as the fire fulled covered you. He wanted to stand up and help you, but his legs wouldn't move. Suddenly, the fire ball burst open, making him cover his eyes for protection. He looked up again and felt his jaw drop slightly.
Your hair...was now almost waist length. It was black with red streaks running through it. Your eyes were covered with your long bangs and your teeth could be seen out of your smirk. They were all long and pointed. Your nails were ruby red and they looked like they could cut through anything. On your back were two huge dragon-like wings, sharp spikes protuding out of the ends of each of them.
Your whole eyes...pupil and all...were a brilliant ruby red.
This wasn't even you anymore. This was something else. This was someone else. This wasn't you...this was Akako.
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That of course is only a small portion to the chapter, but it's still my favorite part ^_^
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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Characters (OC's)
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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Characters (OC's)
Date Submitted
Views 1092
Favorites... 5
Vote Score 3
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Media Digital drawing or painting
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Media Digital drawing or painting
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AlleyCat17 on April 8, 2008, 6:19:00 AM
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this pic is awesome and know i finally know what she looks like that and i have to say that looks awesome.*faves*
wagz20 on April 7, 2008, 11:56:12 AM
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melina678 on April 7, 2008, 1:56:04 PM
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wagz20 on April 8, 2008, 1:42:27 PM
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