HCB manga page 1

Well, so here it is. Not half bad. I like the different... I don't know what you would call them "views" in each panel, yeah a comic artist has to draw different angles and scenes to make even a small conversation between to people look interesting, otherwise the comic is boring.   like the inking with the gray and black, makes it cool profession even though it's a fan comic. Good first page, but I think in some of the characters in some panels look "looney toonish" but Kai is pretty young though

yeah, but what can ya do? *shrugs* it's not like I can tell him his art sucks and we aren't going to use it. I know he'll get better over time. I actually edit some of the stuff and mix ups.