HCB manga page 3 by melina678

HCB manga page 3

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Description

The third page for the Heroes come back manga.

Art by KaiTheWolf
Editing by me
Story by TripleDdizzy420

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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Comics (doujinshi)
Date Submitted May 23, 2008, 5:55:52 AM
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Media Digital drawing or painting
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witch_13888 on June 5, 2008, 2:25:52 PM

wow, this is pretty cool! :3

wagz20 on May 23, 2008, 2:16:18 PM

lol, action scenes are difficult, could use work. the proportions don't seem to look right, but I like the action lines and understanding you can have body parts come out, you're never limited to just draw just inside the box. in the last panel Yasou could have been closer up to show depth and his sis could have been small to show that she was farther away, looks bigger than him.
-_-, ok i'll stop critiquing, lol.