In the arms of her demon...
In the arms of her demon...
In the arms of her demon... by melina678
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urgh, ok, so wagz20 was telling me how Kyo was looking too much like a girl >_> so now I've been practicing with him to make him look more like a guy. It's hard with how his hair and eyes are designed >_< you'll be seeing a lot more pics of him as I practice with him....urrgghh...this is why I usually only draw girls =.=
This pose was referenced off of a Vampire Knight picture I saw
This pose was referenced off of a Vampire Knight picture I saw
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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Characters (OC's)
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Category Anime/Manga » Naruto series » Fan Characters (OC's)
Date Submitted
Views 1300
Favorites... 4
Vote Score 2
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Media Digital drawing or painting
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SweetxinsanityxSarah on November 4, 2009, 4:37:58 PM
AncientMoonLight on June 13, 2008, 9:13:50 AM
melina678 on June 13, 2008, 9:22:40 AM
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AncientMoonLight on September 17, 2008, 12:25:13 PM
tinystarkitten on June 14, 2008, 4:00:42 PM
wagz20 on June 13, 2008, 11:21:10 AM
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lol, kinda funny how you worry about what i think; but then again i am always commenting your work and i'm pretty honest when i critique (i tend to do that more to people who are more skilled than younger people, for obvious reasons)lol, i had another critic with me this time, he's my critic actually, my brother, lol. first the stuff we liked: what stuck out to use was the neck, looked masculine with kind of an adam's apple. the hands look more masculine with the knuckles(great job on them once again! his face also looks more boyish. i know they're hard) and the eyes look way cool but not too famine. but overall we both think you're doing great, and you'll do even better with more patice as you draw him more.
here's some advice from my bro and me: my bro thought he was a girl at first glace till he saw the shape of his neck.so he can be recognized as a boy ^_^. but collar bone doesn't make much sense and could have been much simpilar, my bro was saying something about the indent between. and his hair just seemed girlish to him being all wavey and he said that he was way too thin and pale, but i told him he's supposed to be pale cause he's like a vamp. and he's supposted to be thin, i also told him that he isn't your character, so he was complaining that he thinks your guy characters are cooler and that he should have the same hair lenght as Toshiro, but i told him nothing you can do there. he was also complianing you should make him muscular, but i told him that he's supposed to be slim and he's not a Gouki like Akumu. the last think we both noticed is he's out of porpotion, his torso is too long and his crouch is too low, but he really liked the shading job on his black shirt, but you could add more folds cause he's wearing a jacket that shouldn't be that tight. clothes are just too smooth, add more folds to cloths like that.
yeah isn't he a pain as a critic? lol, now ya know how i feel, sorry this was sooo long. and as for Melina, no complaints, you got her down :). but i'm sure this guy isn't as hard for you as Akumu, he's a man, no doubt about it lol. but i'm glade you're practicing guys, cause my bro is telling me to practice girls more, lol. so we'll work though our weaknesses together. but i really like how this pic turned out and the pose, i'm guessing that's a vamp. romance story.
wow i think i'm done lol. :P
here's some advice from my bro and me: my bro thought he was a girl at first glace till he saw the shape of his neck.so he can be recognized as a boy ^_^. but collar bone doesn't make much sense and could have been much simpilar, my bro was saying something about the indent between. and his hair just seemed girlish to him being all wavey and he said that he was way too thin and pale, but i told him he's supposed to be pale cause he's like a vamp. and he's supposted to be thin, i also told him that he isn't your character, so he was complaining that he thinks your guy characters are cooler and that he should have the same hair lenght as Toshiro, but i told him nothing you can do there. he was also complianing you should make him muscular, but i told him that he's supposed to be slim and he's not a Gouki like Akumu. the last think we both noticed is he's out of porpotion, his torso is too long and his crouch is too low, but he really liked the shading job on his black shirt, but you could add more folds cause he's wearing a jacket that shouldn't be that tight. clothes are just too smooth, add more folds to cloths like that.
yeah isn't he a pain as a critic? lol, now ya know how i feel, sorry this was sooo long. and as for Melina, no complaints, you got her down :). but i'm sure this guy isn't as hard for you as Akumu, he's a man, no doubt about it lol. but i'm glade you're practicing guys, cause my bro is telling me to practice girls more, lol. so we'll work though our weaknesses together. but i really like how this pic turned out and the pose, i'm guessing that's a vamp. romance story.
wow i think i'm done lol. :P
Karima on June 13, 2008, 9:47:37 AM
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luckylace222 on June 13, 2008, 9:32:53 AM
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However I would love if you checked out some of my art on my character Xaliirekur, on what I need to improve on etc. Much thankies! <333