Super Mario Bros. Afterlife (original comic series)

i''m now beginning a fan comic series. i''m doing this to both practice, and see how people will react to my perspective on something that has been around for years. one day, i plan to show this and the proceeding pages to nintendo, in the hopes of using it as a means to land a job with them. not that they would ever like the idea itself, but they may like me as an artist :)