Rage

lol don't hate me for this!!!
I don't really know where I got the idea for this story. Just a random comic.

Don't ask why King Puppy is mentioned in the comic.

If this is popular, it might motivate me into making a cleaner, better version of this

This is only a sketch. Please review lol ^^
(in case you were wondering ^^)

For unknown reasons, people were being kidnapped and brutally murdered by persons unknown. Jak and Keira try to find out who's responsible and Keira ends up being kidnapped. For some unknown reason, Jak and Erol team up, but before they can do anything, Erol disappears as well.

A few days later, Jak is wandering in the wasteland and runs into Erol, who was in bad shape. He tells Jak who was responsible for the deaths. It was someone by the name of King Puppy, whom Jak dimly remembers falling out from a time rift a few days before the killings start.
Learning that Keira died sets Jak off into a rage as he, Torn and Ashelin set off to King Puppy's hideout to extract vengeance. Of course, somewhere along the way, Vin gets a good idea to build a time machine.
After a furious battle with the possessed King, Vin shows up and activates the time machine where everyone was blasted two weeks into the past where they have full knowledge of the future (the ones that are still alive)
Figuring out that it was the time machine Vin was experimenting on that caused the time rift, Jak destroys it, saving Daxter, Baron Praxis, Jinx, Veger, Samos, Keira and Erol form a bloody end.

END!!!