Konoha Festival (1)

A better try at drawing manga. In this one, there's a festival in Konoha. Up on a rooftop, either unaware or uncaring of the festivities, is my OC. Lee, in the dark, only sees his outline against the moon, and decides to attack, thinking him to be an intruder.

A little more detail, shading, and story telling in this effort. Still pretty rough, though. The house in the last panel, and the entire third panel, were the most fun to draw, while Lee himself was aggravating as hell, and STILL didn't come out right! Oh well, please comment!

Panel 1: (Scroll- ShoBu) (Sound effect- Schwiff)

Panel 2: (Sound Effect- Party!) (Sound Effect: Hahaha!) (Speech: ...)

Panel 3: (Speech- Lookin' good!) (Speech: Thanks, it's a new kimono!) (Speech: Lookit me, I'm ANBU!) (Speech: Cool!)

Panel 4: Lee: Gai-sensei was right! This is a splendid festival!

Panel 5: (Lee's thought: What? An intruder? I cannot let him disrupt the festival! I will fight him myself!)