Zero the Soul Reaver

Okay...this is a pic I did during Government class on a free day. I inked it and gave it to a friend who gladly scanned it for me. That is why the quality is so poor. It only took me about fifteen minutes and I did no erasing. The art style is inspired by Shaman King but the char, Zero, is one I have for Trigun. She is Rem's daughter and Vash's 'sister'. She was created for a fanfic on ff.net I have. Please review. Flames are also welcome. It leaves room for improvement.