in the dark

OK I finnaly have time to give details.

In answer to the first question. I used PSP7

Well a couple of months ago now, I was fiddling around with my touch pad and trying to regain my skill with it. Seeing how I was unable to do so for half a year. I was playing with the diff colors and things, and got this somehow. This is pretty old, so sence Im ALOT better than I was when I did it, I personally say this sucks. You might like it, I dont. lets see what I see wrong with this now

-skin tone is to dark
-his head is freakily pointy
-hair is to small
-the bit of his bangs that hang down are barely visible
-His right fist's fingers are in a line, rather than jagged and showing the egdes
-eyes are to narrow
-body is to thick
-there is no shadowing on his left arm where the black meets
-neck is too skinny'
-eyebrows are too choppy

Ya know, Ive never seen an artist point out thier own mistakes... well thats a first.....

im gonna stop rambling