Whee, I colored Avaelyn!!
Whee, I colored Avaelyn!!
Whee, I colored Avaelyn!! by plungergirl
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Stratadrake on June 2, 2004, 10:45:25 AM
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KamiAkai on April 16, 2004, 6:11:35 AM
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ryu83 on March 10, 2004, 6:57:49 AM
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Mangolious_kiwi on March 7, 2004, 9:48:56 PM
DreamOfFire on March 7, 2004, 4:04:47 PM
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Jenniberry on March 7, 2004, 3:16:02 PM
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Two things that struck me as a bit oddly is that some of the textures don't contour to her body as well as they could. This goes mostly for the "net" decor she is wearing as well as the zipline (fanny pack?) she is wearing, the texture on them looks "flat", it should be compressed a little more near the edges, sorta like this:<br />
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My second little gripe is her tail. This isn't a gripe about this drawing in specific but more about a lot of cat-people types in general. To me it looks merely as if you pinned the tail on to her hind end rather than the tail being an extension of the backbone For example, she probably wouldn't have that little indent in her backside (just above the belt line) because her tail stems from about there. And give some thought to what a set of shorts/jeans would have to look like for a tailed person to put them on and wear them. I.e. where does the tail fit when she gets dressed in the morn? (If you've ever seen Ratchet from Ratchet & Clank, his jeans have a "tail seam" to accommodate for his tail)<br />
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Don't let my little gripes get you down any, you did a good job on the detailwork, color, and shading. I can ramble on about gripes and little details a lot but in the end I still like this drawing as a whole. Good work!