Poem "Like a Soap" by robpoet

Poem "Like a Soap"

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Here is a poem. I've maked it in 30 minutes. It isn't my style, but some lines weren't good. By this poem the lines "You're very carefull, but you stay a bull" Has a late-night-intention if you know what I mean. Please comment!!!

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Category Games » - All Titles » Tales Of... series
Date Submitted April 20, 2006, 6:45:09 AM
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Red_Quatre on April 20, 2006, 10:55:05 AM

Sweet poem, but you submitted it in the wrong section, silly! You submit it in the writting section.

MitchellP on April 20, 2006, 7:49:13 AM

This is nice is it free verse or did you follow one of the rules? I like to do free verse because you can express more without being restricted by the rules.
Some parts are a little hard to read because of the size of the lettering but still good.
Keep it up ^_^