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Kitty Gal

Kitty Gal

Kitty Gal by shoujoneko
Kitty Gal by shoujoneko

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shoujoneko
I've had this lineart since January, and I'm using it for my Prac Extension in art. What do you think? Please give some critical feedback, I want the major to be awesome!!

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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Characters (Female)
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HyperHanyouGal780 on April 16, 2007, 5:20:42 AM

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HyperHanyouGal780sooo cute!!! i luff it just the way it is!! oh and isn't the red part our her eyes the pupil???? *shrugs* great job! *Favs

URIKOHOSHI on February 5, 2007, 6:10:56 AM

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URIKOHOSHIFACE A LITTLE UM... SHARP.... BUT SHE REALLY LOOKS LIKE SHE COULD REALLY BE THERE! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! (BELIEVE ME, HOW MANY BAD
DRAWINGS I'VE SEEN... SIGH...
 
URIKOHOSHI

Yorda_Valkov on May 1, 2006, 10:45:56 PM

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Yorda_ValkovWoW!!!That`s awesome!!!!!

anime-junkie on April 12, 2006, 11:22:34 PM

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anime-junkieya know, i cant draw leg/SLENDER legs, so its GOOD work!!!! ^-^

xIronMaidenx on April 12, 2006, 4:44:20 AM

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xIronMaidenxI think she looks fine. I like her leg size the way it is. As for the breast size, so what if she doesn't have D sized boob! And they don't look like she stuffed oranges up her shirt. It looks fine. And the shoulder on the right does not need to be sharper because it is not proped up like the other shoulder is. And her eyes are cute!! She don't need any pupils. Anyways, I like it!! That's really cute!Oh yeah, and the ears are adorable!!

royally_spooky on April 11, 2006, 7:48:05 PM

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royally_spookyI think she looks cute the way she is.^^ WHAT YAH TALKIN BOUT CRYSTALHAWK!?

FrenchSpeakingLightBulbz on March 23, 2006, 4:51:44 AM

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FrenchSpeakingLightBulbzEeee, so cute! I love the outfit and the the position. ^o^

enielle on March 11, 2006, 5:10:22 AM

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enielleoh, and I normally forget to do this (hence I only have about 3 on my list) but *faves*!!

enielle on March 10, 2006, 9:10:18 PM

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enielleaww, that's so cute!

obvious skill went into it... her legs arent too big, is that guy trying to say every girl should have long skinny legs? they look fine, great work!

Allester on March 10, 2006, 5:24:47 AM

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Allestertis good and I c ur point "Crystalhawk" os I give it 5.5 stars

Amaya_Ivanov on March 10, 2006, 1:00:19 AM

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Amaya_Ivanovaww^_^she looks realy cute!!!
love the eyes and mought^_^

Crystalhawk on March 9, 2006, 11:53:36 PM

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CrystalhawkPlease don't hate me, but I take stuff like "give me critisism" quite literally, so, here I go (and I don't try to be mean, honnestly):

Her legs are a little too big, and, you know muscular, like a sledge thrower (might be exagerating a tad there) Her breast looks somewhat like se's stuffed two oranges down her shirt, too round. Her right shoulder is a little too smooth, might need to be a tad pointier, like the left one. Se would probably look a little more human if you added pupils as well, but tat's a judgement call.
Colouring looks really good, so does the head, perticularily the hair, might want to have the ears a little smaller...

Again sorry, if I went too far just ignore me...