Shino and Hitomi

Aburame Shino and my OC, Opprorer Hitomi. When this picture was in black and white it was alot better, but I drew it for a photoshop test. I like how it turned out though, I think I could have done better. I have alot more pictures to test on and if I don't get better after those I'm just going back to colored pencils. If you have any ideas how I can improve please tell me. I take requests!!! (and this isn't old like my other stuff.)