Warrior Legends

These are the main characters in the comic. There are plenty more but they're side characters. Here's a decription of each character featured. I added the plot of the story too.

Lyn: The one in the middle who is a Goddess. Sadly, she is deceased. The story all started with her.

Unaski: The young girl with green hair. She's an energetic thief. While in the middle of one her "missions", she gets caught by the king and in an attempt to steal one of his treasures, she gets teleported to another world. Her dream: to ride a boat and become a pirate. Her hobby: collecting bottle caps.

Kanimaru: The boy with brown hair. Kanimaru has a normal life with his friends. His home life is another story. His father left him and his mother when he was 4yrs old and hasn't been seen since. As a result, his mom became a depressed drinker. He tries to stay at home as little as possible. His life changes however when he finds a girl... in his... tree?

Naomi: The mysterious girl with silver hair. Little is known about her other than the fact that she is ashamed of her orgins. She feels as though it is her duty to help correct the mistakes caused by her ancestors.

Kiru: The quiet boy with black hair. Kiru is a young freshman at Kanimaru's highschool. He keeps to himself most of the time and rarely says much. But for unknown reasons, he pays most of his attention to senior girl named Yamiro, Kanimaru's crush(I'll draw her later).

Cumi: A hyper red-haired weapon seller who loves to travel. Cumi enjoys traveling around collecting different material for weapons. She can make a high number of different elemental combinations including (fire/earth, ice/lightning, water/wind)and more. Her weapon was actually a gift passed down in her family. Its an ancient artifact over a million years old.

Plot: Unaski's ruler is trying to unlock the power of the Gods and Demons by causing war and destruction on not only their world but others as well. This causes Kanimaru's world to intertwine with Unaski's and now demons are trying to take control of his city as well. At this rate, their worlds and other universes will be in turmoil and the ultimate power will be unlocked. Its up to Kanimaru and his friends to find the treasures that are strong enough to block out the destructive power and save the world.

I'm not good with plots(that's why my other comics were long forgotten). Tell me what you think of this pic and this plot and give tips. Hope you like it!