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RPV 001

RPV 001

RPV 001 by sword_dragon
RPV 001 by sword_dragon

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sword_dragon
ite..... this numbers thing is only goin on this page so people who havent read a manga will get it.... so here is my half of the 1st page of RPV.... i dunno if Fluffy duin any *shrugs* anyway... this is just the introduction 2 the main charai''s that be Lucas Riley Hayden and Leo... (they have yet 2feature there only so much u can fit on one page ^___^) .... anyway i went over my divides with black lines hmmm i dunno if that will stay cos it looks more comic style than manga *shrugs again*

Writin!
Pannel 4: Find them Quickly
Pannel 5: *in distance* (well from were we are now) This way they cant get too far.... (back to them)*thinks* shoot there catching up to us... (out loud) lets go!!
Pannel 6: HURRY (was goin 2 be writin in japapnese XD)
Pannel 7: *those guys chasin them* This way... dont let them get away.... Hurry find them.... and Hai Teicho (japanese)

Any characters from RPV © to me SwordDragon and Fluffy_fan4774

oh yea no realation whatso ever to organisation XIII

CONTEST RELATED TO THIS http://forums.fanart-central.net/viewtopic.php?p=772803#772803

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Category Comics » - Original Comics » - Pages & panels
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Media Graphite pencil
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Gerudowolf on January 11, 2007, 7:25:44 PM

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GerudowolfThis looks awesome^^ You should try to make the writing clearer because it's a bit hard to read it. If you have photoshop you could edit the text and make it more readable.

I really like your art so I'll probably read the whole manga if you finish it :D

sword_dragon on January 11, 2007, 10:49:53 PM

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sword_dragonsorry i dunt ave photoshop XP and i rewrote it in the desgription sorry if it hard to read

thomast67 on November 21, 2006, 7:04:17 AM

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thomast67AWESOME A MANGA!!XDD THIS IS GOING 2 BE SOOOOO FREEKIN COOLIES!!!XDD I LUV IT ALL READY SD!!XD *GLOMPS*

Living_Dead_Girl on November 18, 2006, 1:09:28 PM

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Living_Dead_GirlXD neato! I'm confused about exactly wht's going on right now, but that's OK cos I get confused about cereal too. Like how is it healthy and sugary at the same time? Yes, I did read it like a Japanese manga. It was a little hard to read, but, other than that, great job so far ^^

Fluffy_fan4774 on November 18, 2006, 5:16:01 AM

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Fluffy_fan4774ohhh X3 and I might TT_TT when I'm able to draw people again

Tot on November 18, 2006, 1:01:52 AM

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Tot*screams, clings, cuddles teh Kitty* Omg! I love you so very very very very much! I've been waiting for the manga. Yay! Riley and Lucas!

DragonxNekoxFire on November 17, 2006, 9:42:11 PM

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DragonxNekoxFirew00t!! Awesome-ness!!
Cant wait for you to add the next page XD
*faves*

manga_rules on November 17, 2006, 7:37:16 PM

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manga_rulesO.O Lucas and Riley on the run O______O I can tell that this will be awsome =D I can't wait to see more -^____^- you must of put alot of time into this =D I love how you made it right to let I mean i'm getting used to it from my Naruto book =3 >w< Lucas and Riley look so Kawaii X3 *favs*

Falconlobo on November 17, 2006, 7:12:59 PM

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FalconloboIt's nice

but the words are a little small