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so...another comic...
and i worked till i was satisfied with its look...
so im happy now...
i REALLy like the way Nirv looks in the last panel...
i have "past" written above the "flash back" and "present" written above the current happenings...
sound good?
though i was a bit irritated at what i wrote in the last panel...it would be a shame..that would be just rude...no reason, just gets on my nerves...
im picky about dialogue..
right now, I'm explaining some "why's" so we're not all like "well they could just..."
also, farin has two different colors schemes on this page, because one i tried to do in marker, the other i did in colored pencil
also,...Dr. veron's appearance...i think i meant for him to be Nirv's color and Nirv was...undecided...but I wasn't thinking...Dr. Veron probably won't stay orange, because I have another character that comes along (WAY) later that is orange....and Nirv will retain this color...
characters and story are subject to change...like, Fan might have different ears by next page...and i might be revising the portion of the story after intro...
as for the bit about the reflection, that will be explained soon...its not the reflection itself Veron's worried about, But how Fan percieved it before he passed out...
i might change that page too...ugh....blarg this is a LOT of drawing to do...