Arangel 'The Lord of Demons'

I'm very proud of this guy. Please leave a review and let me know what i can do to fix it up. This guy is what i would call the 'bad guy' of my book 'Renegade'. In a few years or so check for it in bookstores... It may be there.^_^ By then i should know as well if i'll have an alias or just use my real name. If i ever decide i'll be sure to let you all know on this site or through e-mail if you show interest.^_^ Arangel is, as the title says, the Lord of Demons. But in literality he is the king of the Vampire Legion. As of the time in the setting of the book, the war against the Lycanthropes(werewolves) is raging, and that's where the name of the book comes in. 'Renegade' represents Draikail, one storyteller of the book. A few years into the war he escaped from battle and went AWOL. Oh, and the big connection with Arangel and Draikail is that Arangel was the one that Changed Draikail.^_^ OK, thanks for listening to my rambling. If you wanna know more about the characters and plot just let me know and i'll be glad to share with you.