Mirages by vanilla_cream_girl

Mirages

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My first poem!At least, I think it's a poem...It's about mirages.You know, those things that you see, when you are really hot and/or thirsty, that aren't really there.I think they are very interesting!Enjoy!

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Category Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry
Date Submitted March 7, 2006, 2:39:09 AM
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Maya on September 4, 2006, 7:40:29 AM

I really like this poem. It gave me inspiration to write poems now! I must fav it! Thanks for writing it :)

vanilla_cream_girl on April 22, 2006, 2:19:10 PM

Thanks!

Rikku_Mogonei on April 22, 2006, 1:12:40 PM

you should be! and you`re welcome ^_^

vanilla_cream_girl on April 22, 2006, 1:00:53 PM

YAY!!!I am AMAZINGLY proud of this pic now!Thank you!

Rikku_Mogonei on April 22, 2006, 12:32:40 PM

you`re welcome! ^_^

i`m a nice person if you let me be ^_^

Its really a shame to all those OTHERS (*pokes non-commenters*) cause I got first comment ^_^

My mommy says I should be proud of my achievements ^_^

As for you...I`d be.... VERY SUPER UBER PROUD! XD

vanilla_cream_girl on April 21, 2006, 10:20:32 AM

Thanks so much Rikku_Mogonei!I have been waiting for a comment on this pic for EVER!!!And what a nice comment it is too!Thanks!n_n

Rikku_Mogonei on April 21, 2006, 6:50:01 AM

what the heck!? these people are STRANGE! (*so am I,lol*)

thats a good poem,and it even rhymed ^_^

a lot of em don`t... O_O