Wolverine

I AM AFRAID THAT VEGETAVIXEN IS WRONG ABOUT THE PROPORTIONS. NOW, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISIM? YOU HAVE POTENTIAL. YOU JUST NEED TO TAKE YOUR TIME WITH YOUR PICTURES. IT SEEMS VERY RUSHED. NOW ANOTHER GOOD THING TO DO IS STOCK UP ON MANY DIFFERENT GRADES OF GRAPHITE PENCILS AS WELL AS A PLETHORA OF DIFFERENT SIZES OF INKING FELT MARKERS FROM .005 ON UP TO .08 OR EVEN LARGER IF YOU PREFFER. ALSO INVEST IN SOME BRUSH STROKE MARKERS TO GET A SMOOTHER LOOK TO A PICTURE. SOON I WILL HAVE SOME OF MY WORK UP AND YOU WILL SEE WHAT I MEAN. GOOD LUCK AND KEEP AT IT.

Hmmmm constructive crit huh? Well I can't really criticise you on this, the proportions are pretty good! But you may ned to work on your colouring a bit! Make it more bold, don't be afraid to press your pencil down hard on the paper! Make those colours stand out! It'll attract more people to lok at your work. If need some tips I have some new ones on my profile! Have a look and see if they help you, ^_^