Akumu Unmasked "line-art"

It looks terrific!!! SO scary!!!! You seem to be very good a demonic characters. I totally suck at those!!! But yeah great picture! *favs*

Kari: O_O I think I just wet my pants

Melina: KARI! *shoves her in a broom closet*

hahahaha, alright, his expression: excellent. Obviously because Kari says it scared her XD. Kari says that you might want to shorten his fang down unless Akako wants to get her lip pierced every time she kisses him, lol I would have to agree with her on that one o.O Kari also says that the first thing she noticed was his eyebrows. She asked if that was supposed to be the focus point of the pic and I told her no. So she says that you should try making the eyebrows not quite so dominating. Maybe shortening them a bit and making them quite as bushy. They can still be bushy, just not that bushy, lol.

But overall we love the pic =D

lol, well Akumu is great at disguise, so he shortens his fangs often which isn't nearly as painful as when he has to retract his wings into his shoulder blades, which hurts like hell, which is why Akumu hates wearing shirts to avoid retracting his wings. well, Akumu was one of my older characters being 200 yrs old and all, so i thought by making his eyebrows bushy it would make him look older.
 
thank you both. and thanks for the advice. and get Kari out of the closet, lol
Akumu: Ha! do I frighten you little human girl?! 

Melina: *gasps* Kari! Do you hear that! You can come out of the closet now! =D

Kari: damn it Melina I'm not a lesbian!

Melina: *laughs and pokes Kari's forehead* foolish little sister

hahahahaha, ok I get it. Although, if eyebrows represented age, then Akako's would be enormous O_O *pictures it* gah! It's like Gai all over again with even bigger eyebrows!

Kari: *looks at Akumu* yus...yus you do

LOL, sry, ya just can't say that without it sounding like a gay joke. lol, pulling a little Sasuke and Itachi moment with the poking, jk. but a could 

make the eyebrows a little finer. *imagens Akako with huge eyebrows*......LMAO.

Akumu: *looks at kari and raises an eyebrow* grrrrrrr got a problem with my eyebrows girl?

Kari: ...yyuuuusss I do! They remind me of the ugliest man in Konoha

Akumu: What did you say girl!!!!!!!!!!! GRRRRRRR, calling me ugly!!!!
 
wagz: oh boy, Kari better hide back in the closet, lol

Kari: *stares at Akumu* ....you're on fire! *about to dump a bucket of water on him*

Melina: O_O *quickly grabs Kari and drags her away a few feet* Kari you baka!

Akako: *sighs and pats Akumu's chest* don't worry yourself about that little girl

LMAO
Akumu: phew, that's good. i had a dream about a bucket of water once, not a good one, my hair was all wet and I smelled like a wet dog.
 

ROFL!!! XDDDD wwwwoooowwww!! Oh, by the way, I posted the oneshot on my profile for you to read =)