thinblood

i found a picture that resembles this but i changed the character the web picture i found is from <br />
http://www.jamesryman.com/fantasy/gallery/thinblood.jpg <br />
so check out that web site it is acually pretty awesome n comment tell me what i messed up on n what looks bad cause i feel like im missing something...................................................<br />
neways so comment<br />
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MUFFINS ANYONE????????????????????????????