Chapter 1 - Melody Of The Night
Submitted October 2, 2006 Updated October 2, 2006 Status Complete | [SasuSaku] ONESHOT Can't you see my pain? Or maybe you just don't care. BUt you turn your back again...is that your final answer? The silence between us only makes it worse. PLEASE READ AND REVIEW! ^.^
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Chapter 1 - Melody Of The Night
Chapter 1 - Melody Of The Night
Disclaimer: I dont own Naruto
Authoress Note: I find this very sad. Oh and they are twenty in this story. Please read and review! Constructive criticism is always helpful for me.
Melody of the Night
By: Destiny R.
There was never a discussion
We never seemed to exchange words
And I begin to wonder
We arent a couple, are we?
The moon bathed over her ivory skin, as her pink locks danced in the violent winds with eyes sparkling like a never-ending sea of emeralds.
She placed a single hand over the life that she held while taking a great interest in the clashing waves. She made the decision that she would never tell him he was going to be a father, it was just better that way.
She let her fingers trace along the railing of the bridge, thinking of the possible outcomes. She was fighting the inevitable. No she didnt try to fight it anymore, she welcomed it.
From a small distance he noticed that she wearing an unenthusiastic expression. Soon after he closed the gap between them and enveloped his arms around her tightly.
He startled her a little since she was completely lost in her realm of thoughts. Obsidian orbs carefully gazed at her, trying to read her thoughts but simply couldnt. He kept searching her for answers. She forced a smile upon her lips for old times sake.
Cascades of pink hair fell onto her face as the winds howled. She clenched her eyes shut feeling the warmth of his body.
Youre my artificial lover
And Im your secret sin
Because there is no love
Even if I love you
For awhile I was able to pretend
But all my smiles were a fake
Im slowly realizing that this is killing me
Your presence is like a poison
Her voice was as sweet as honey almost as sweet as her perfume.
He inhaled her intoxicating aroma.
Leaving a trail of hot kisses and some love bites along her neck, he still was not satisfied.
Suddenly a thick raindrop landed right on forehead, waking her up to reality. One after another the raindrops fell, drenching her hair.
She opened her eyes and found herself focusing on his strong chest. She hesitantly lifted her head to meet his serious face.
His wet raven hair was plastered on his forehead due to the rain.
A playful raindrop slipped over her forehead between her eyes, over her nose&until making its way smoothly to her lips.
She just showed no emotion as she felt a light touch on her chin lifting her face.
She caught sight of those pearls, as dark as a starless night.
Never did his onyx gaze seem so intense to her.
His lips played with hers in a perfect harmony.
She hugged his neck, letting her fingers run through his hair.
He rested one hand on her back and the other on waist, bringing her closer to him.
She decided that it would be wise to enjoy such a perfect moment, fearing it may be her last before she crosses the line.
I feel certain your kisses will be the death of me
I can feel myself breaking apart
With every caress, every kiss
Youre a deadly addiction
She slowly opened her eyelids, trying to catch her breath and met his onyx orbs once again.
A frown etched itself on her face, feeling the warmth of his body leave her once again.
The beautiful dream was over.
It was all too familiar.
He looks back not only seeing a frown but eyes full of hurt.
The deafening silence.
Why did she believe this time would be any different?
Her emerald orbs filled up with tears and soon mixed with the raindrops.
Cant you see my pain?
Or maybe you just dont care
But you turned your back again
Is that your answer?
The silence between us only makes it worse
I tried to hold on but it was wasted to just watch you go
I feel just as empty whether youre here or not
Crying silently, I feel as hallow as your eyes
Somehow, she found herself back to the railing.
Or was it just fate?
Contact with wet railing made her shudder and a light breeze didn't ease her not one bit.
A single cherry blossom petal caught her eye.
Its graceful appearance was so captivating
But when it withers away, it will soon be forgotten.
Her orbs land back to her destination.
But now she knows
He won't try for her, not now
Although she will die to know if he loves her
She's all alone
The edge grows near
Will you mourn me? Miss me?
Will another take my place?
In the end, it really doesnt matter because
I just want to step over the edge
My artificial lover&
I have no more love to give
Im just surprised it got so far
Authoress Note: Sorry for the crappy ending. I find it so tragic sobs-
So much for a happy ending...
If you were confused about my story, read it again to understand it better.
&W ell she killed herself. If you read it carefully I gave plenty hints from the start(foreboding). Come on people! It's kinda obvious if she's against the railing of a bridge and it says the edge grows near and I just want to step over the edge(myfave line). I'm sorry if you didnt get itjust read it again, this story just needs a little more thought put into it while reading.
When I posted this oneshot on fanfiction.net people got confused, so I just said this to make it clear :)
Well was it good or bad? Please tell me in your reviews! Arigatou, I hope you liked it. Ja ne :)
Authoress Note: I find this very sad. Oh and they are twenty in this story. Please read and review! Constructive criticism is always helpful for me.
Melody of the Night
By: Destiny R.
There was never a discussion
We never seemed to exchange words
And I begin to wonder
We arent a couple, are we?
The moon bathed over her ivory skin, as her pink locks danced in the violent winds with eyes sparkling like a never-ending sea of emeralds.
She placed a single hand over the life that she held while taking a great interest in the clashing waves. She made the decision that she would never tell him he was going to be a father, it was just better that way.
She let her fingers trace along the railing of the bridge, thinking of the possible outcomes. She was fighting the inevitable. No she didnt try to fight it anymore, she welcomed it.
From a small distance he noticed that she wearing an unenthusiastic expression. Soon after he closed the gap between them and enveloped his arms around her tightly.
He startled her a little since she was completely lost in her realm of thoughts. Obsidian orbs carefully gazed at her, trying to read her thoughts but simply couldnt. He kept searching her for answers. She forced a smile upon her lips for old times sake.
Cascades of pink hair fell onto her face as the winds howled. She clenched her eyes shut feeling the warmth of his body.
Youre my artificial lover
And Im your secret sin
Because there is no love
Even if I love you
For awhile I was able to pretend
But all my smiles were a fake
Im slowly realizing that this is killing me
Your presence is like a poison
Her voice was as sweet as honey almost as sweet as her perfume.
He inhaled her intoxicating aroma.
Leaving a trail of hot kisses and some love bites along her neck, he still was not satisfied.
Suddenly a thick raindrop landed right on forehead, waking her up to reality. One after another the raindrops fell, drenching her hair.
She opened her eyes and found herself focusing on his strong chest. She hesitantly lifted her head to meet his serious face.
His wet raven hair was plastered on his forehead due to the rain.
A playful raindrop slipped over her forehead between her eyes, over her nose&until making its way smoothly to her lips.
She just showed no emotion as she felt a light touch on her chin lifting her face.
She caught sight of those pearls, as dark as a starless night.
Never did his onyx gaze seem so intense to her.
His lips played with hers in a perfect harmony.
She hugged his neck, letting her fingers run through his hair.
He rested one hand on her back and the other on waist, bringing her closer to him.
She decided that it would be wise to enjoy such a perfect moment, fearing it may be her last before she crosses the line.
I feel certain your kisses will be the death of me
I can feel myself breaking apart
With every caress, every kiss
Youre a deadly addiction
She slowly opened her eyelids, trying to catch her breath and met his onyx orbs once again.
A frown etched itself on her face, feeling the warmth of his body leave her once again.
The beautiful dream was over.
It was all too familiar.
He looks back not only seeing a frown but eyes full of hurt.
The deafening silence.
Why did she believe this time would be any different?
Her emerald orbs filled up with tears and soon mixed with the raindrops.
Cant you see my pain?
Or maybe you just dont care
But you turned your back again
Is that your answer?
The silence between us only makes it worse
I tried to hold on but it was wasted to just watch you go
I feel just as empty whether youre here or not
Crying silently, I feel as hallow as your eyes
Somehow, she found herself back to the railing.
Or was it just fate?
Contact with wet railing made her shudder and a light breeze didn't ease her not one bit.
A single cherry blossom petal caught her eye.
Its graceful appearance was so captivating
But when it withers away, it will soon be forgotten.
Her orbs land back to her destination.
But now she knows
He won't try for her, not now
Although she will die to know if he loves her
She's all alone
The edge grows near
Will you mourn me? Miss me?
Will another take my place?
In the end, it really doesnt matter because
I just want to step over the edge
My artificial lover&
I have no more love to give
Im just surprised it got so far
Authoress Note: Sorry for the crappy ending. I find it so tragic sobs-
So much for a happy ending...
If you were confused about my story, read it again to understand it better.
&W ell she killed herself. If you read it carefully I gave plenty hints from the start(foreboding). Come on people! It's kinda obvious if she's against the railing of a bridge and it says the edge grows near and I just want to step over the edge(myfave line). I'm sorry if you didnt get itjust read it again, this story just needs a little more thought put into it while reading.
When I posted this oneshot on fanfiction.net people got confused, so I just said this to make it clear :)
Well was it good or bad? Please tell me in your reviews! Arigatou, I hope you liked it. Ja ne :)
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Symphoniaprincess101 on September 29, 2007, 11:57:45 AM
i know how sakura feels in this story.Kwazi on September 6, 2007, 10:25:08 PM
Kwazi on
*Snif* that was sad .But it was beautiful.
Symphoniaprincess101 on August 11, 2007, 5:32:13 AM
Awsome story TTT^^TTTsasukeXsakuraforever on March 14, 2007, 9:02:09 AM
*sniff sniff*.........GREAT JOB! ^_^SoraYamato on February 1, 2007, 10:06:19 AM
SoraYamato on
Oo. Very nice use of foreboding ^^ A very nice piece of writing ^_^sflower250 on January 4, 2007, 7:54:57 AM
sflower250 on
aaaaw, so Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!!!!!sflower250 on January 4, 2007, 7:54:56 AM
sflower250 on
aaaaw, so Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad!!!!!Ila-Sweet on December 7, 2006, 7:17:46 AM
Ila-Sweet on
WowThatz deep...
well,
favz...
1mangalover on December 6, 2006, 10:50:41 AM
1mangalover on
so good!!9127 on October 22, 2006, 2:57:32 AM
9127 on
Thanks! =DSasuSaku01 on October 3, 2006, 10:04:54 AM
SasuSaku01 on
Beautifully written!! GREAT JOB!!cherryblossom93 on October 3, 2006, 7:47:20 AM
SOOOOO SAD! (wipes tear out of eye) BUT SOOOOO GOOD! ANOTHER AWESOME STORY! (and another favs!)