Chapter 0 - Prologue : A New Beginning
Submitted June 7, 2009 Updated June 7, 2009 Status Incomplete | This is the story of Adokad and his life in the final fantasy world. It has multiple things from the final fantasy games with original characters. Rated T for upcoming elements. Chapter 2 done. My very first story that I'm working on.
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Chapter 0 - Prologue : A New Beginning
Chapter 0 - Prologue : A New Beginning
Hey all, this is one of my first stories that I actually wanna write, so yeah...here it goes...
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Prologue : A New Beginning
It was another boring day in my town. The birds were singing happily and the flowers were blooming. Springtime was upon us yet again. I went back to my house, put down my bookbag, and crashed on the bed.
"Adokad, how was your day?"
I looked up to see my mother. She was a good mother. She made very good food and had a nice personality towards other people, which is a very good thing.
"Meh, it was okay I guess," I replied. "Could've been better, could've been worse."
"Oh, okay. You know, your brother is leaving today."
"What!?" I exclaimed.
My brother was visiting us. We haven't seen him in a while, as he has his own family to attend to since he's in his 30's.
"Where is he?" I asked.
"He went out to buy a few things for the trip back," she said. "He should be back soon."
"Ah, I see. Well, I'll be in my room if you need me."
She left to go get dinner started. I got on my homework, which was pretty much nothing since I did most of it in class. After that, I was kinda bored so I started thinking about things. My mind wondered off into a world of fantasy. Before I knew it, my brother was home.
"Heeeeeeey Dink!" He yelled.
"Welcome back Vance." I said.
"Hey Vance." My mom said, coming into the living room area.
"Dink, you know I'm leaving soon." Vance said.
"Yeah..." I replied as I looked at the ground sadly.
"Don't feel bad Dink, I'll be back at Thanksgiving, you can bet on that!" Vance replied.
He laughed, but not in the way he usually laughed. It was more of a "goodbye" laugh. I then thought of something.
"Hey Vance, could you train me one more time before you go?" I asked.
"Well...I guess I have time. Fine, for a little while." He replied.
"Awesome." I said.
I ran to go get my wooden sword. Vance had been training me to become a "knight" as he calls it. I knew I this wouldn't come in handy at all, unless someone tried to rob us. It was just very fun to learn how to attack with a sword. When I came back into the room, Vance was already outside.
"Come on out here, Dink! I don't have all day!" He shouted at me.
"You two play nice okay?" My mom told us.
"You can trust us mom." I replied.
I ran outside to greet my brother. He pulled his sword into battle position, and I copied.
"Are you ready?" Vance questioned.
"Yes." I replied.
"Very well...let us begin! Show me what I taught you." Vance said.
BOSS BATTLE!
Enemie(s) :
Vance - Lv3
HP:??
MP:??
Party :
Adokad - Lv1
HP: 72
MP:0
I was kinda nervous and didn't want to attack my own brother. But these swords couldn't really harm anybody, they were just for training. I just stared at him.
Adokad - Attack - Vance - 12 damage
"Very good. How about this though?" Vance said.
Vance - Attack - Adokad - 23 damage
Adokad - HP: 49
"Gah, that hurt!" I screamed.
I decided to try again.
Adokad - Attack - Vance - 11 damage
"C'mon Dink, you can do better than that." He teased.
Vance - Attack - Adokad - 20 damage
Adokad - HP: 29
"Gah..." I groaned.
I couldn't keep this up much longer, so I decided to go all out.
Adokad - Flame
"Imblue...FLAME!" I shouted.
The energy of fire went into my sword in a flash.
"See, now you're starting to think." Vance said.
Vance - Defend
Adokad - Attack - Vance - 15 damage CRITICAL
"How did you..." Vance was puzzled.
"Heh, don't underestimate me bro." I replied.
"That's it!" Vance said.
I stared at him eyes wide as he put down his sword.
"You're gonna fight with your fists?" I asked.
"Yes." He replied.
Adokad - Attack - Vance - 17 damage
"Haha!" Vance laughed.
Vance - Counterattack - Adokad - 28 damage CRITICAL
"Ow..." I grunted.
"I think that's enough for today Ado. You did very good, you're turning into a fine knight. Your Flame ability can help you a lot, so use it wisely." He said.
"Will do." I replied happily.
"Here," he said, "take this with you. It's my lucky bracelet."
"Thanks." I replied.
Battle won!
Gained exp : 0
Gold : 0
Item - Bracelet
I watched as my bro pulled away. I was honestly surprised that I did "so well". My bro is truely a monk, which means he uses his fists to fight. His sword is just a joke compared to his true skill. I looked at the Bracelet, wondering what it did. I put it on, then got ready for bed. Today was a wild day, but it won't be as fun without a trainer. I fell asleep wondering what the next day would bring into my boring average life...
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Hope you liked it. I'm sorry it was kinda short, but I think I put in enough for the prologue. Give me opinions on the battle system and stuff. Adokad is my name backwards by the way, if you didn't know. I'm gonna work hard on this story, and it will also have two sequel stories after I finish this one, depending on people liked it or not. I'll try to get the first chapter up ASAP, as I am very busy with school and stuff.
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Prologue : A New Beginning
It was another boring day in my town. The birds were singing happily and the flowers were blooming. Springtime was upon us yet again. I went back to my house, put down my bookbag, and crashed on the bed.
"Adokad, how was your day?"
I looked up to see my mother. She was a good mother. She made very good food and had a nice personality towards other people, which is a very good thing.
"Meh, it was okay I guess," I replied. "Could've been better, could've been worse."
"Oh, okay. You know, your brother is leaving today."
"What!?" I exclaimed.
My brother was visiting us. We haven't seen him in a while, as he has his own family to attend to since he's in his 30's.
"Where is he?" I asked.
"He went out to buy a few things for the trip back," she said. "He should be back soon."
"Ah, I see. Well, I'll be in my room if you need me."
She left to go get dinner started. I got on my homework, which was pretty much nothing since I did most of it in class. After that, I was kinda bored so I started thinking about things. My mind wondered off into a world of fantasy. Before I knew it, my brother was home.
"Heeeeeeey Dink!" He yelled.
"Welcome back Vance." I said.
"Hey Vance." My mom said, coming into the living room area.
"Dink, you know I'm leaving soon." Vance said.
"Yeah..." I replied as I looked at the ground sadly.
"Don't feel bad Dink, I'll be back at Thanksgiving, you can bet on that!" Vance replied.
He laughed, but not in the way he usually laughed. It was more of a "goodbye" laugh. I then thought of something.
"Hey Vance, could you train me one more time before you go?" I asked.
"Well...I guess I have time. Fine, for a little while." He replied.
"Awesome." I said.
I ran to go get my wooden sword. Vance had been training me to become a "knight" as he calls it. I knew I this wouldn't come in handy at all, unless someone tried to rob us. It was just very fun to learn how to attack with a sword. When I came back into the room, Vance was already outside.
"Come on out here, Dink! I don't have all day!" He shouted at me.
"You two play nice okay?" My mom told us.
"You can trust us mom." I replied.
I ran outside to greet my brother. He pulled his sword into battle position, and I copied.
"Are you ready?" Vance questioned.
"Yes." I replied.
"Very well...let us begin! Show me what I taught you." Vance said.
BOSS BATTLE!
Enemie(s) :
Vance - Lv3
HP:??
MP:??
Party :
Adokad - Lv1
HP: 72
MP:0
I was kinda nervous and didn't want to attack my own brother. But these swords couldn't really harm anybody, they were just for training. I just stared at him.
Adokad - Attack - Vance - 12 damage
"Very good. How about this though?" Vance said.
Vance - Attack - Adokad - 23 damage
Adokad - HP: 49
"Gah, that hurt!" I screamed.
I decided to try again.
Adokad - Attack - Vance - 11 damage
"C'mon Dink, you can do better than that." He teased.
Vance - Attack - Adokad - 20 damage
Adokad - HP: 29
"Gah..." I groaned.
I couldn't keep this up much longer, so I decided to go all out.
Adokad - Flame
"Imblue...FLAME!" I shouted.
The energy of fire went into my sword in a flash.
"See, now you're starting to think." Vance said.
Vance - Defend
Adokad - Attack - Vance - 15 damage CRITICAL
"How did you..." Vance was puzzled.
"Heh, don't underestimate me bro." I replied.
"That's it!" Vance said.
I stared at him eyes wide as he put down his sword.
"You're gonna fight with your fists?" I asked.
"Yes." He replied.
Adokad - Attack - Vance - 17 damage
"Haha!" Vance laughed.
Vance - Counterattack - Adokad - 28 damage CRITICAL
"Ow..." I grunted.
"I think that's enough for today Ado. You did very good, you're turning into a fine knight. Your Flame ability can help you a lot, so use it wisely." He said.
"Will do." I replied happily.
"Here," he said, "take this with you. It's my lucky bracelet."
"Thanks." I replied.
Battle won!
Gained exp : 0
Gold : 0
Item - Bracelet
I watched as my bro pulled away. I was honestly surprised that I did "so well". My bro is truely a monk, which means he uses his fists to fight. His sword is just a joke compared to his true skill. I looked at the Bracelet, wondering what it did. I put it on, then got ready for bed. Today was a wild day, but it won't be as fun without a trainer. I fell asleep wondering what the next day would bring into my boring average life...
--
Hope you liked it. I'm sorry it was kinda short, but I think I put in enough for the prologue. Give me opinions on the battle system and stuff. Adokad is my name backwards by the way, if you didn't know. I'm gonna work hard on this story, and it will also have two sequel stories after I finish this one, depending on people liked it or not. I'll try to get the first chapter up ASAP, as I am very busy with school and stuff.
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