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Well this story is gonna take a twist on reality as well as fiction, and its onna turn out little different than I planned, but its good, so READ AND COMMENT PLEASE!!! hahah

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - The Library
Submitted: December 25, 2006 • Updated: August 24, 2009
Word count: 339 • Size: 1k • Comments: 4 • views: 250

Chapter 2 - The Happenings
Submitted: February 4, 2007 • Updated: August 24, 2009
Word count: 628 • Size: 3k • Comments: 3 • views: 232

Chapter 3 - Unbelievable!
Submitted: February 13, 2007 • Updated: February 13, 2007
Word count: 694 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 234

Chapter 4 - The Akwardness
Submitted: February 15, 2007 • Updated: February 15, 2007
Word count: 626 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 231

Chapter 5 - The Moment You've Been Waiting For...not really...
Submitted: February 24, 2007 • Updated: February 24, 2007
Word count: 448 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 161

Chapter 6 - Suichi's Past
Submitted: March 9, 2007 • Updated: March 9, 2007
Word count: 791 • Size: 4k • Comments: 1 • views: 210

Chapter 7 - Expectations and Weird Cousins
Submitted: August 24, 2009 • Updated: August 24, 2009
Word count: 654 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 183

Chapter 8 - Awkward Moments that Aren't Really Awkward
Submitted: August 24, 2009 • Updated: August 24, 2009
Word count: 665 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 178

Chapter 9 - Great Movies and Deep Words
Submitted: August 24, 2009 • Updated: August 24, 2009
Word count: 551 • Size: 3k • Comments: 0 • views: 183

Chapter 10 - Fun in the Kitchen
Submitted: August 24, 2009 • Updated: August 24, 2009
Word count: 754 • Size: 4k • Comments: 0 • views: 168

Comments

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rainbowfox16 on October 7, 2007, 9:45:43 AM

rainbowfox16 on (Chapter: 6)
rainbowfox16giggles* Hey did you spy on me or something to come up with Shoko? She's just like me! (it's kinda scarey..)

AmmyK on February 4, 2007, 10:08:14 AM

AmmyK on (Chapter: 2)
AmmyKGomenasai!!!! It is too short!

Sniperguy on May 30, 2007, 8:48:52 AM

Sniperguy on (Chapter: 2)
SniperguyYeah, but it's still cool.

firehead on March 4, 2007, 5:51:19 AM

firehead on (Chapter: index)
fireheadWow this is pritty awesome!^^

dont_ever_quote_Mark_Twain on March 3, 2007, 12:41:57 PM

dont_ever_quote_Mark_Twain on (Chapter: 5)
dont_ever_quote_Mark_TwainOmg, this story is really cool! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

IQQT on February 19, 2007, 12:06:27 AM

IQQT on (Chapter: index)
IQQTAwesome! A few chapters are bit mixed up and rushed, but overall, it's so kawaii!

AmmyK on February 17, 2007, 11:06:19 AM

AmmyK on (Chapter: index)
AmmyKI WANT MORE COMMENTS!!!! ...*sniff* Pwease???...T-T

Animerocker on February 11, 2007, 12:04:01 AM

Animerocker on (Chapter: index)
AnimerockerWow that was great write more please

IQQT on February 6, 2007, 7:25:19 AM

IQQT on (Chapter: index)
IQQTCOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^

IQQT on January 6, 2007, 1:46:17 AM

IQQT on (Chapter: index)
IQQTAWESOME!! Write another chappie! And that's an order!

ZTTB on January 2, 2007, 3:48:13 AM

ZTTB on (Chapter: index)
ZTTBThats AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ and thanx ^_^

AmmyK on January 2, 2007, 4:15:49 AM

AmmyK on (Chapter: index)
AmmyKThanx for the comment!

darc on January 1, 2007, 3:44:51 AM

darc on (Chapter: 1)
darcPretty good so far! Yeah, you should make it longer. Keep writing! ^^

AmmyK on January 1, 2007, 3:27:18 PM

AmmyK on (Chapter: 1)
AmmyKThanks! I wrote the 2nd chap, and was called to the kitchen for something and my sister closed the internet window before i could even upload it! Stupid Sister!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!! lol.
AmmyK

AmmyK on December 25, 2006, 10:25:24 AM

AmmyK on (Chapter: 1)
AmmyKSorry it's there twice i didnt notice until now! ^_^'

AmmyK on December 25, 2006, 10:24:03 AM

AmmyK on (Chapter: 1)
AmmyKSorry if it's too short. This is my firat time doing this. ^_^' heh. Please Comment!