Chapter 1 - Welcome to Heck.
Submitted November 4, 2005 Updated January 19, 2006 Status Incomplete | This is my version of what kind of punishment should Otouto get for being a dog on Ani. A Pandora Box twist
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Chapter 1 - Welcome to Heck.
Chapter 1 - Welcome to Heck.
The Punishment
by Lady O
Disclaimer: I don't own neither of the YYH cast; i only own "the creature" and
any other characters that i may come up with.
Hello everyone, this is my version of what kind of punishment should Otouto get
for being a dog on Ani. Hey, he asked for this. Koenma tried to avoid him this
torture, buuuuut noooooooo he wanted to be a bad @$$; so, now let's see if he can
do all the badassing that he wanted to!
Thanks for putting up with me. Enjoy! A Pandora box Twist
The Punishment:
1- Welcome to Heck.
Otouto arrived to to the gates of Makenkai (Limbo), the worst hell for all souls;
a place that not even Koenma would dare to visit. It was a very chaotic place,
where all you could hear were the horrifying scream of all the punished demons.
He found the air was heavy, cold and moisty like in a cavern; the river of blood
stained his shoes. Corpses of demons were laying everywhere putrefying the little
breathable air left. The sight made even him, the once a powerful demon in all
Makai, nauseous.
Looking up he saw a starless pit-black heaven surrounded by high cliffs, probably
to avoid any soul to escape from it's destiny; a destiny that could last for all it's
eternity.
"Ahhhh, a new one", said a cavernous voice from behind Otouto's neck.
"I've been expecting you...dog".
Now, Otouto has been known for his bad temper, and not even in hell he wouldn't
let no demon disrespect him like that, no even if he was now a human again.
"What-did-you-called-me?" the once demon asks as he slowly turns to face where
the voice was coming from.
As he turns he sees...no one; but total darkness. "WHERE ARE YOU?" he shouts;
but all he can hear are the tormented souls cries from everywhere he turns his head to.
"I called you a DOG, 'cause that's what you're and by the time i'm done with you...
well, (chuckles) you'll be my dog".
"Show yourself and we'll see who's gonna be who's dog!" Otouto's responds.
Suddenly, out of the nothing, a masked burly man with dragon-like wings appears
in front of him. The creature was almost as tall and corpulent as Otouto. His hair
was in a wavy glossy black that fall to his mid back; and a thin lock braided in a
silver string; his outfit was black from head to toe, except for the similar silver
strings that contoured his clothes to his body; even on his knee-high boots.
On top of this, he wore a leather floor-length coat. His face was covered by a silver
mask that appear to be glued to his face. And his eyes... were in the bluest blue ever
known to man or demon; which was a very odd match considering that his skin was
as dark as Otouto's. The whole sight of this imposing creature made Otouto feel a
cold chill down his spine.
**********
Well so far for chap one. And a question pops to mind... where's Ani?
If you can guess I'll give you my bra.
by Lady O
Disclaimer: I don't own neither of the YYH cast; i only own "the creature" and
any other characters that i may come up with.
Hello everyone, this is my version of what kind of punishment should Otouto get
for being a dog on Ani. Hey, he asked for this. Koenma tried to avoid him this
torture, buuuuut noooooooo he wanted to be a bad @$$; so, now let's see if he can
do all the badassing that he wanted to!
Thanks for putting up with me. Enjoy! A Pandora box Twist
The Punishment:
1- Welcome to Heck.
Otouto arrived to to the gates of Makenkai (Limbo), the worst hell for all souls;
a place that not even Koenma would dare to visit. It was a very chaotic place,
where all you could hear were the horrifying scream of all the punished demons.
He found the air was heavy, cold and moisty like in a cavern; the river of blood
stained his shoes. Corpses of demons were laying everywhere putrefying the little
breathable air left. The sight made even him, the once a powerful demon in all
Makai, nauseous.
Looking up he saw a starless pit-black heaven surrounded by high cliffs, probably
to avoid any soul to escape from it's destiny; a destiny that could last for all it's
eternity.
"Ahhhh, a new one", said a cavernous voice from behind Otouto's neck.
"I've been expecting you...dog".
Now, Otouto has been known for his bad temper, and not even in hell he wouldn't
let no demon disrespect him like that, no even if he was now a human again.
"What-did-you-called-me?" the once demon asks as he slowly turns to face where
the voice was coming from.
As he turns he sees...no one; but total darkness. "WHERE ARE YOU?" he shouts;
but all he can hear are the tormented souls cries from everywhere he turns his head to.
"I called you a DOG, 'cause that's what you're and by the time i'm done with you...
well, (chuckles) you'll be my dog".
"Show yourself and we'll see who's gonna be who's dog!" Otouto's responds.
Suddenly, out of the nothing, a masked burly man with dragon-like wings appears
in front of him. The creature was almost as tall and corpulent as Otouto. His hair
was in a wavy glossy black that fall to his mid back; and a thin lock braided in a
silver string; his outfit was black from head to toe, except for the similar silver
strings that contoured his clothes to his body; even on his knee-high boots.
On top of this, he wore a leather floor-length coat. His face was covered by a silver
mask that appear to be glued to his face. And his eyes... were in the bluest blue ever
known to man or demon; which was a very odd match considering that his skin was
as dark as Otouto's. The whole sight of this imposing creature made Otouto feel a
cold chill down his spine.
**********
Well so far for chap one. And a question pops to mind... where's Ani?
If you can guess I'll give you my bra.
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