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Chapter 1 - Trouble

From the original Fan fiction.net...
 
Kagome is finally able to use her credit card. She spent over $42.00 hundred dollars. She has no choice but to babysit the Kinomoto's in order to pay for her costs. While babysitting two young children at a house(

Chapter 1 - Trouble

Chapter 1 - Trouble

Konnichiwa my peeps! Here is a new story I made up...Okay I was bored...enjoy and please review:)

 

It was a Friday after noon. 15 year old, Kagome Higurashi was walking home from school, with her three best friends. Eri, Yuka, and Ayumi. They were talking about the usual things (You know how Kagome should be dating Hojo) Then who would not appear around the corner but Hojo.

"Hey! Higurashi!" He said waving as he ran up to meet them. "EEEEEEK!" yelled Eri, "It''s him! It''s him!" Yuka and Ayumi joined squealing. Kagome sighed deeply as she saw Hojo join them as they walked. Kagome looked at her left and saw Hojo smiling at her. ``Higurashi how are you?'''' He said. Kagome made a fake smile ``Fine!'''' She said lying. ``I bought you something for that fever!'''' He opened his backpack and pulled out a Ziploc bag filled with black stuff in it. Hojo handed the bag to her. Kagome took it and stared at it wondering what it was. Her friends joined in. ``Uuuumm.'''' Kagome said staring hard at it.

``Is it Tea?'''' Ayumi asked. 

``Black Tea!'''' Hojo said smiling. ``Drink it and you''ll feel much better I promise you that! Kagome!'''' Kagome smiled ``Ok!'''' She said. They all stopped at her house. ``Well… my house!'''' Kagome said pointing to the gate. Her friends gave her each a hug made an `I''ll call u'' sign and walked off. Kagome stared at Hojo waiting for him to leave. ``Well…'''' She said seeing if he''ll catch on. Hojo sighed, looked up into the sky. He sighed again. ``Kagome, I was wondering if you wanted to go out with me on Saturday?'''' He waited for an answer, when he heard nothing he looked down and realized a bit too late that Kagome had already left. ``Oh!'''' He said disappointed then he walked away. 

 

Kagome''s Crib

 

``I''m back guys!'''' Kagome called out as she closed the front door to her house. `

`Hey Kagome!'''' said Mrs. Higurashi. She had a disappointed face. Kagome noticed this and sat down across the table. ``Hey mom!'''' She said with a smile, ``What''s wrong?'''' 

``Kagome do you remember about that credit card I gave you 2 months ago?"Asked Mrs. Higurashi. `

`Yes…'''' said Kagome wondering were this was going. ``Well I received a bill it says you''ve used over $42.00 hundred dollars on this card!'''' Kagome made a face; it looked something like this (O.o) ``Ohhhhhh! That!'''' She thought back 2 weeks ago. -Flash back- ``Hey Kagome can I use your card onegaii!'''' Ayumi begged looking at Kagome with pleading eyes. ``No you can''t!'''' Kagome snapped at her. ``I thought we were friends!'''' Ayumi said with tears in her eyes. ``We are friends!'''' Kagome said. ``Then prove it!'''' Ayumi said. ``C''mon you know that I can only use it when it''s really, really necessary!'''' Kagome said. ``But this is really, really necessary!'''' Ayumi said in high tone. Kagome glanced at the product Ayumi wanted to buy; it was a Gucci handmade purse. Price, about $360.00 dollars. ``And you want ME to buyYOU a $360.00 dollar purse for what reason?'''' Kagome was getting a bit too loud, people started to stare. ``Hello you never gave me my birthday present witch was 2MONTHS AGO!'''' Ayumi yelled. Now people were really staring. ``Kagome just buy it for her onegaii!'''' Eri and Yuka pleaded. `` But it is true! You didn''t really give her anything!'''' Eri agreed. Yuka nodded. ``Hey who side are you on?'''' Kagome yelled. Eri And Yuka tried to calm down Kagome; they feared her most when she was angry. Kagome sighed, glanced at the purse. Then at Ayumi, with begging eyes. Kagomegot an anger mark on her forehead. ``FINE!'''' Kagome yelled, she took out her credit card and ignored the feeling that she would soon regret this, handed it to the clerk and sighed deeply. Well her friends thought that if she could buy something for Ayumi, that she could also buy some stuff for them and thiswas the result… -Flash back end- ``Oh that, huh heh heh heh!'''' Kagome sweat drop as her mother gave her a lecture on how impotent it is to have responsibility. On top of that take her credit card away and ground her for2 months. ``You know I don''t like to punish you Kagome,'''' Mrs. Higurashi sighed. ``But you''re 15 years old your not a child anymore…'''' ``Gomen'''' said Kagome it was all she could say, she stared hard at the table. ``Now you know your going to have to Baby-sit for the Kinomoto''s tomorrow right? Mrs.Higurashi said as she got up from the table, and walked up to the stove. ``Hai'''' Kagome said, `` To pay off for the card….'''' ``Right! now go to you''re room! I''ll call you when dinner is ready ok?'''' She said, putting a pot (That already had water) on top of the stove and boil it. ``K'''' Kagome got up and left the kitchen. As she walked into the hallway she had a feeling someone was watching her. ``Hey, Grampa... Sota'''' She said in deep distress. ``I know you guys were eaves dropping…'''' Sota and her Grampa made this kind of face (Oo;) ``How did you-?'''' Sota began but was interrupted as Kagome stomped up the stairs and slammed her bedroom door shut. After dinner Kagome wrote in her Diary wondered what Inu-Yasha was up too and fell asleep on her bed. Next Day Kagome got up, did her usual schedule when she got up in the morning. (You know take a shower, get dressed, eat breakfast…etc) After all that Kagome stepped up to the front door about to leave. ``Anone, Kagome?'''' Mrs. Higurashi said as she walked out of the kitchen and went up to Kagome. Kagome stopped, hand holding on to the doorknob she turned to face her mother. ``I was wondering if you could take someone with you?'''' Mrs. Higurashi asked as she walked up to her and gave a light hug. ``Well?'''' Mrs.Higurashi asked sternly as she let go of Kagome and looked at her in the eyes. ``Will you take someone with you?'''' ``Fine, I''ll take Sota.'''' Kagome said carelessly. ``Sota can bearly watch over himself! How can he watch over you?''''. "OH!" said Kagome. "SO now YOU think I can''t watch over MYSELF!" "Honey, I''m just worried about you!" Mrs. Higurashi explained. "I don''t want anything to happen to you while you''re over there!" ``Oh, great!'''' Kagome sighed. ``Why don''t you take Inu-Yasha with you?'''' Mrs.Higurashi suggested. ``Why Inu-Yasha?'''' Kagome said. "I can''t" ``And why not?'''' ``Well…because he doesn''t like little kids.'''' Kagome answered. ``But Inu-Yasha and Sota get along fine.'''' Mrs. HIgurashi said. There was an awkward silence in the room. Kagome said nothing knowing it was true Inu-Yasha did get along well with Sota. "Then it''s settled!'''' Mrs.Higurashi said. ``Inu-Yasha is going with you!'''' That was that, Kagome knew it was the end of the discussion. `Well I guess I''m going to have to bring Inu-Yasha from the feudal era after school.'' Kagome thought with a huge sigh. ``Well you''re going to be late so you better get going!'''' Mrs. Higurashi said as she opened the front door for her daughter. ``Ok…Bye'''' Kagome said as she walked out the front door, took her bicycle and rode to school. Afternoon Kagome stared up at the clock on the wall, waiting for the bell to finally ring. It was 8th period the last period of the day.She had Global studies the most boring subject ever, she stood still in her seatwaited impatiently for the bell to ring. `Ring all ready!''she thought. A few minutes later the bell finally rang. RRRIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNGGGGGGG! The end of 8th period. ``Freedome!'''' Kagome yelled jumping out of her seat. There was a rush of students filling the hallway as Kagome walked out of the room into the hallway. She noticed Ayumi , Eri , and Yuka trying to catch upwith her.She walked out the door, into the schoolyard grabbed her bicycle and rode away towards the mini well house where the well was hidden. As she rode she thought ''Because of them I have to do all this work, and they can just go home and chill! I don''t I''m gonna want to talk to them anymore!'' Kagome got off her bicycle and walked into the mini well house; she spotted the well in the dim light, and jumped into it. ``Inu-Yasha are you there?'''' Kagome called out as she climbed out the well. `He should be around here somewhere…'' Kagome thought, as she straightened her skirt. She walked around in the woods looking for Inu-Yasha. Then walked into a clearing. ``I sense a Shikon jewel!'''' Kagome said as she spun around to see a huge, green, extremely stinky, ogre demon with a machete in one hand and the Shikon jewel on his left wrist. ``Give me the Shikon-no-tama!'''' The ogre growled. ``No…How about you give me YourShikon jewel" Kagome yelled as she pinched her nose quickly. ``Fine I''ll just have to take it the hard way!'''' The ogre said, with a grin. Kagome looked away from the dreadful sight of the ogre''s teeth. (AngelAkane appears out of thin air) ``Whoa! When was the last time you brushed you''re dirty mouth and took a bath? You stink!'''' Akane said using one of her Angel wings to cover her nose. ``Who the hell are you?''''Grouled the Ogre. ``How''d you get here?'''' Kagome asked shocked. ``Nani? I''m the one making this story!" Akane yelled. "If I want this ogre to hurt you badly Kagome, I can make that happen… to bad Inu-Yasha is going to be here in about 30 seconds. Sayonara!'''' . She sighed and poof she was gone… `Ok…that was weird…'' Kagome thought, as she let go of her nose. ``Give me the Shikon-no-Tama!'''' Yelled the demon. Then ran towards Kagome and started swinging his machete. ``Hey!'''' Kagome yelled. The ogre almost hit her. ``Give it to me or I''m going to slice you to pieces! Then I''ll have you for lunch! And finally, I''ll take your shikon jewel.!'''' He yelled. Then he lifted up his machete over Kagome''s head about to strike. She fell to the floor feeling very feint of the awful stench coming from the ogre''s armpits. ``Iron-reaver- soul stealer!''''Inu-Yashasaid as he attacked the ogre demon with full force, and killed it. ``Kagome, Are you ok?'''' Inu-Yasha asked worried as he walked up to Kagome. ``Yeah, I''m fine'''' Kagome replied with a huge sigh of relief as she got up off the ground, and stood next to Inu-Yasha. ``Inu-Yasha, the ogre had a Shikon jewel.'''' Kagome said. ``Where is it?'''' Inu-Yasha asked looking around. ``It''s on his left wrist.'''' Kagome said as she pointed at the ogre''s bloody slimy wrist. ``Hey your not going to touch it are you!'''' Kagome couldn''t help gut feel disgusted. ``What do you want me to do?'''' Inu-Yasha said looking at her. ``Take out your Tetsusaiga and slice his wrist off what else?'''' Kagome said with disgust. ``Fine'''' Inu-Yasha said as he took out his Tetsusaiga and sliced the ogre''s wrist with it. The Shikon jewel went flying into the air. Inu-Yasha jumped up and got it, then gave it to Kagome. ``Okay.'''' Inu-Yasha said. ``Now what?'''' Kagome shrugged, she looked at her watch. She gasped, she lookes as if she had seen a ghost! ``Aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!''''She yelled. This is the end of my first chapter of When A Stranger Calls. Stay tuned for the next chapters…please review, and thank you for reading. Oh yeah and if you want to TAG me you can. NO FALAMMING ME:O T: Tell what u like A: Ask questions G: Give a suggestion Thnxs :)
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Inuyashasbabygirl on July 14, 2006, 8:07:44 AM

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Inuyashasbabygirllove it

inuyasha_naruto_lover on July 10, 2006, 5:09:13 AM

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inuyasha_naruto_loverit's really good!
it's just htat it's a bit scrunched up together at that one point, and it's kind of hard to read.
But other wise, I love it because rhat movie was awesome!

bigguy on July 8, 2006, 11:03:48 PM

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bigguygreat story