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Chapter 1 - The Laser Shoot

Eggman had shooted a laser at Sonic and he might get killed! If he's dead, what will happen to Amy?

Chapter 1 - The Laser Shoot

Chapter 1 - The Laser Shoot
Dead or Alive? Chapter 1: The Laser Shoot

Author's Note: I do not own Sonic the Hedgehog or any of the characters.

Name: Talking

Name: YELLING!

(Author's comments)

???: Help me, Sonic!!

Sonic: Oh, no! It's Amy! I've got to save her!

Sonic went to Eggman's Lair, where was seen in Rail Canyon.

Sonic: Eggman! Let go of Amy, right now!

Amy: Sonic! You're here!

Eggman: No! I can't do that!

Sonic: Why not?

Eggman: Well, one, it'll ruin my reputation, two, I don't want to, and three...

Sonic: What?

Eggman: You'll die!! (That doesn't sound right)

Sonic: What?! What do you mean you're mine?

Eggman: You'll see.

Eggman got a laser beam and aims at Sonic.

Amy: Sonic!!

Eggman: This laser will shoot you and you'll may get killed by it! Ahahahaha! Am I good or what?

Sonic: Oh, you're going to shoot a laser at me? Oooo! I'm so scared! I'm gonna run away like a big baby! *Tries to run, but got stuck on the floor* What the?

Eggman: You didn't know? It's fly paper! You can never go off even if you run as fast as you can!

Sonic: Oh, no. I'm doomed.

Amy: Sonic!!!

Eggman: Now, bye bye, Sonic the Hedgehog!

BOOM! It hitted Sonic direct hit!

Amy: NOOOOOOO! You...can't...be dead...EGGMAN! YOU'LL PAY FOR THIS!!!

Amy got out of the trap from Eggman and hitted him with her Piko Piko Hammer. After that, she ran to Sonic. Since Eggman shooted the laser at Sonic, the flypaper was gone.

Amy: *sobbing* Sonic! Don't...die...please! For me...

Sonic: ...Amy...

Amy: Sonic! You're alive!

Sonic: Amy...I...love...you...

He got unconsious.

Amy: Noooooo! SONIC!!!!!

Meanwhile...

Amy was at Station Square Hospital, seeing if Sonic will be okay. Tails and Knuckles was their, too, to see if Sonic was okay. Then, the doctor came.

Doctor: Well, we have good news, and we've got bad news.

Amy: What's the good news?

Doctor: Well, the good news is that the operation was a sucess!

Tails: And what was the bad news?

Doctor: That Sonic will have a short chance of living. We've did everything we can, but that's all we can do.

Amy: Can we...see him?

Doctor: Of course! His room is Room 425.

Amy: Okay. I'll go see him right now.

In Room 425...

Amy slowly opened the door, and saw Sonic sleeping with those oxygen masks on his mouth.

Knuckles: Does he look alright?

Amy: He said that he'll have a short chance of living. I just hope that he'll be alright.

Then, Sonic slowly opens his eyes and saw Amy, Knuckles, and Tails.

Amy: Hi, Sonic! Are you alright?

He slowly nods his head yes.

Tails: Um, guys, I'll be seeing you guys later. I need to speak with somebody right now. Maybe later on, you'll get a surprise from me. See you guys later!

END OF CHAPTER 1

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LKK on April 21, 2006, 2:01:38 AM

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LKKGreat Story!!^_^ Keep Going!

Cowgirl10 on December 25, 2005, 5:17:11 AM

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Cowgirl10Good, it's great so far.

Animelover569 on August 1, 2005, 5:24:49 AM

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Animelover569 Awesome story so far!!!! I love it!!! Poor sonic.

Animegirl1994 on July 18, 2005, 11:42:18 AM

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Animegirl1994I knew I've should proofread this. Can you please please please comment?! O O
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