Chapter 1 - Mushra's poem
Submitted August 13, 2006 Updated April 13, 2007 Status Complete | Just a quick poem on how Mushra feels.this is my first one so please no flames!
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Chapter 1 - Mushra's poem
Chapter 1 - Mushra's poem
I wrote this a year ago and i say it sucks,but my friend forced me to put it on here,so here it is so enjoy(or die from reading this piece of crud)
Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
The night sky is so beautiful,
but not as beautiful as you.
Your so wonderful I can't express it,
My angel from above.
Your smart, kind, and pretty
How can I show you my love?
My feelings burn with the intensity
of a thousand white suns,
But when I try and tell you
I just wanna run.
In this poem I've admitted
how I feel about you.
Do you love me?
Cause my love is true
I know what your thinking"PIECE OF CRUD!" I never should've written it SOMEBODY KILL ME!(don't)
Please comment.I don't care if it's good or bad just comment.
Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
The night sky is so beautiful,
but not as beautiful as you.
Your so wonderful I can't express it,
My angel from above.
Your smart, kind, and pretty
How can I show you my love?
My feelings burn with the intensity
of a thousand white suns,
But when I try and tell you
I just wanna run.
In this poem I've admitted
how I feel about you.
Do you love me?
Cause my love is true
I know what your thinking"PIECE OF CRUD!" I never should've written it SOMEBODY KILL ME!(don't)
Please comment.I don't care if it's good or bad just comment.
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mushrambogirl on January 6, 2009, 12:22:10 AM
i am not very good at poems but it looks like u rAnimegurl4life on January 6, 2009, 6:57:34 AM
Thanks, but this one sucks to me. I wrote this FOREVER ago, when I was actually okay with YakumoxMushra.Wow, that seems like so long ago.
firetempesttakashi on October 30, 2007, 10:03:44 AM
so very very sweetcrazicat06 on January 12, 2007, 9:37:52 AM
crazicat06 on
I think that this poem is very sweet.Animegurl4life on April 13, 2007, 5:55:14 AM
thnx.gaaragurl4life on August 18, 2006, 11:00:54 AM
You know I said you should I did't say you had to Ha Ha HaAnimegurl4life on January 8, 2007, 7:09:16 AM
Yeah right! you kept nagging me about how i should put it on fac.I wouldn't have been suprised if you started doing the nag dance.