Chapter 1 - the first test
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Chapter 1 - the first test
Chapter 1 - the first test
ENTOIENTOI
The Beginning
Part 1. The firsttest.
This is the Planet entoi(see gallery) looks a lot like earth with the difference that itssurrounded by 2 mysterious rings, the rings r the protection for the planetagainst possible interplanetary and planetary threats.
The rings are property tothe Legna, they r angelic creatures and true protectors of the planetand life on it.
Michal is the follow up ofthe king, a true prince
He just got the message tocome as soon as possible to the throne room
There r his Brothers andsisters, apparently there parents had summoned them all.
Michal: loves all kinds of sciences but also sports and games.
Mati: a beauty that loves dancing, singing but has also aninterest in the supernatural, especially white Magic.
Entou: loves practical jokes
Tenou: mysterious and loves the paranormal especially darkmagic and art.
Aquada: loves to swim and dive, with an interest in lifeunder water.
Matao: has an interest in metal and technology.
Mati: Michal! You to? Any idea why we r summoned
Michal: no idea, I hopedthat you would know
Aquada: I think where going to find out
Mati: shall we?
Michal: Why not?
All the brothers andsisters come into the throne room.
Nueeq: come in my children
Mati: Mother what is going on?
Gnik: children we have to discuss something with you
Entou: do we get something to eat?
Mati: dont you think on anything else entou?
Entou:ermdrink?
The group feels embarrassed
And entou gets a hit of thewooden hammer by Mati
Entou: ouch, why was that necessary?
Entou feels on the top ofhis head while he says that.
Mati:think about it, realhardEntou.
Gnik: childrenI have summoned you all for an important mission.
Like you know, children of the kingneed to undergo an important test
Just to know of they can handle theresponsibility to rule over the kingdom.
Aquada:what test r you talking about father?
Gnik:for a start you all get this here
Gnikgives them all something that looks like a watch.
Gnik: This isyour virtual receivers/transporters, a VR transponder
It looks like a watch, but itsactually some sort of computer that is in
Connection with the virtual world.
Nueeq: in these objects will come a virtual being,some sort of virtual
Protection, this creature can travelthrough the virtual world for the
Necessary information orcontacting others, but they can also get into
The real world to help you out,but you will find that out soon enough.
Mati: I dont see any creature, how do you activatethis thing?
Gnik: that wouldbe your first test.
Nueeq:you first have to discover you own virtual friend; that will be the first
Test.
The Beginning
Part 1. The firsttest.
This is the Planet entoi(see gallery) looks a lot like earth with the difference that itssurrounded by 2 mysterious rings, the rings r the protection for the planetagainst possible interplanetary and planetary threats.
The rings are property tothe Legna, they r angelic creatures and true protectors of the planetand life on it.
Michal is the follow up ofthe king, a true prince
He just got the message tocome as soon as possible to the throne room
There r his Brothers andsisters, apparently there parents had summoned them all.
Michal: loves all kinds of sciences but also sports and games.
Mati: a beauty that loves dancing, singing but has also aninterest in the supernatural, especially white Magic.
Entou: loves practical jokes
Tenou: mysterious and loves the paranormal especially darkmagic and art.
Aquada: loves to swim and dive, with an interest in lifeunder water.
Matao: has an interest in metal and technology.
Mati: Michal! You to? Any idea why we r summoned
Michal: no idea, I hopedthat you would know
Aquada: I think where going to find out
Mati: shall we?
Michal: Why not?
All the brothers andsisters come into the throne room.
Nueeq: come in my children
Mati: Mother what is going on?
Gnik: children we have to discuss something with you
Entou: do we get something to eat?
Mati: dont you think on anything else entou?
Entou:ermdrink?
The group feels embarrassed
And entou gets a hit of thewooden hammer by Mati
Entou: ouch, why was that necessary?
Entou feels on the top ofhis head while he says that.
Mati:think about it, realhardEntou.
Gnik: childrenI have summoned you all for an important mission.
Like you know, children of the kingneed to undergo an important test
Just to know of they can handle theresponsibility to rule over the kingdom.
Aquada:what test r you talking about father?
Gnik:for a start you all get this here
Gnikgives them all something that looks like a watch.
Gnik: This isyour virtual receivers/transporters, a VR transponder
It looks like a watch, but itsactually some sort of computer that is in
Connection with the virtual world.
Nueeq: in these objects will come a virtual being,some sort of virtual
Protection, this creature can travelthrough the virtual world for the
Necessary information orcontacting others, but they can also get into
The real world to help you out,but you will find that out soon enough.
Mati: I dont see any creature, how do you activatethis thing?
Gnik: that wouldbe your first test.
Nueeq:you first have to discover you own virtual friend; that will be the first
Test.
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Marsz on May 21, 2011, 3:15:07 AM
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Ok. Mati it is. I'll work on it.