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Chapter 1 - The Twist of Love

This is really similar to the real series. The only difference is that it's got my own charaters and Zuko, Aang, Katara, Sokka, Toph... well every one accept Mai. Oh, and the episodes are different.

Chapter 1 - The Twist of Love

Chapter 1 - The Twist of Love
Book 2


Jet: See that guy there?
Jet was pointing at Zuko.
Jet(cooly): I want him to be part of the Freedom Fighters.
Smeller Bee: BUT JET! We don't even know anything about him.
Jet: But we're about to.
Smeller Bee: Oh no your not...
Jet: I am.
If you want the romantic bit go down till you see the fine print romantic if you can't see it write a comment and I'll make it clearer.




Iroh buys some flowers.
Iroh: I just want the place to look nice incase someone brings home a lady-friend!
Iroh elbows Zuko friendly sort of pointing to Natalie.
Natalie frowns at Iroh thinking he's meaning someone else(since she likes Zuko).
And Zuko looked at Iroh angrilly but also in a blushing way(knowing his Uncle mean Natalie).
Zuko, Iroh and Natalie walk in to their new tea shop AKA their home.
The man who inployed them: Why hello there! I'm Lee, and your...
Zuko: Zuko and this is Natalie and my Uncle, Iroh.
Lee: Ah, my new imployes I have a few things to get ready wait here and have some tea.
Lee walkes out and into a room.
Iroh pours three cups of tea.
They all take a sip(out of different cups of couse!)
When Iroh took his sip he drank it but had the "Sour Face".
Iroh: This tea is distgusting! It taste like water and hot juice!
Zuko: All tea is water and hot juice.
Iroh: I can't beileve a member of my own family just said that!


Romantic

After a long days work in the tea shop when Natalie is moping and cleaning the tables and Zuko is bringing the dirty dishes to Iroh to clean.
Iroh(happily): You know, You and Natalie are going on a date!
Natalie and Zuko: WHAT!!
Iroh(slowly): You and Nat...
Natalie and Zuko: We know what you said!
Iroh: Oh good. (Long pause). Then lets get ready!
Iroh pushes Natalie out into another room and tells her to get changed.
Natalie hesatates but knows she can't get out till she's changed.
Then pushes Zuko into his room and gets hime ready.
By the time they were both out-side...
Natalie: Your hairs not fuzzy!
She just interupted me... Oh never mind.
Zuko: So!
Natalie roughs Zuko's hair up till it's fuzzy and messy.
Zuko: My Uncle spent ten minutes on my hair.
Natalie: Stop being such a baby.
Zuko: I'm not a baby!
Natalie: Well you were a baby(as in before a toddler).
They stop in front of a fountain.
Zuko remembers Natalie still dosn't know he's a firebender.
Zuko walks behind her and covers her eyes.
Zuko: Close your eyes and don't peek!
Natalie covers her eyes and Zuko firebends the torches and that made the fountain dazzle!
Zuko: Ok, you can open them now.
Natalie looks in amasment and hugs Zuko's arm.
Zuko: Well?
Natalie: (giggles) Can't you see I'm speechless!
Then she peaks(kisses) him on the cheek...

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Ghostly on December 23, 2008, 3:37:33 PM

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Ghostlyaw thats soo cute ^_^

AvatarFanZukoFanTOO on December 23, 2008, 3:41:47 PM

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AvatarFanZukoFanTOOThanks, I think I should do it more interesting though

darkwolf333 on November 14, 2008, 9:33:33 AM

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darkwolf333cool

AvatarFanZukoFanTOO on November 14, 2008, 9:34:19 AM

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AvatarFanZukoFanTOOThanks