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Chapter 1 - awwwee

sooo cute

Chapter 1 - awwwee

Chapter 1 - awwwee


*yo-sum sat under a tree watching the lake

Suki: hey yo-sum

*yo-sum turns his head to see who was shouting to him*

Yo-sum: oh heya suki

Suki: what ya doing?

Yo-sum: just sitting here

Suki: can I join?

Yo-sum: yeah sure

*Yo-sum pats the ground next to him*

*suki sits*

Suki: have you seen roxi?

Yo-sum: not today

Suki: that's weird, maybe she's with kazinya

Yo-sum: yeah maybe

*yo-sum stares across the lake in thought*

Suki: what ya thinking about

Yo-sum: huh, oh nothing

Suki: oh come on

Yo-sum: honestly its nothing

Suki: you sure?

Yo-sum: yep

Suki: well okay then

*yo-sum goes back to his mindless staring in thought*

Suki: beautiful isn't it?

Yo-sum: huh

*suki waves her hand across to say the whole scenery*

Yo-sum: oh yeah it is

*suki moves across into a hug resting her head on yo-sums chest*

*yo-sum blushes*

*suki looks up and giggles then snuggles up to yo-sum*

*yo-sum smiles and wraps his arms around suki*

*suki and yo-sum lean into a kiss*

Roxi: HEYA!!! ^_^

*suki and yo-sum jump apart just before they kiss still holding hands*

Roxi: what you two doing?

Yo-sum: erm we were looking at a duck yeah a duck

Roxi: what duck

*roxi looks out on the lake*

Suki: oh look its gone now

*roxi sits down beside them*

Suki: so roxi where ya been

Roxi: oh I went over to kazinya's

*roxi notices suki and yo-sum holding hands, suki sees roxi looking and pulls her hand away*

*roxi looks confused*

Roxi: O…..K, so have you seen tokenya?

Suki: nope

Yo-sum: nope

Roxi: awww….. oh well

Yo-sum: so where is kazinya?

Roxi: he's sitting around in the dojo

Suki: how long has he been there?

Roxi: three hours

Suki: and he was just sitting there

Roxi: nah he trained for a bit

Suki: how long

Roxi: about half an hour

Suki: haha that it?

Roxi: well yeah hehe, he's having a lazy day

Suki: every day is a lazy day to him

*yo-sum staring out on the lake smiling*

Roxi: yo-sum hellloooo yo-sum

Suki: YO-SUM!!!!!!

Yo-sum: huh

Roxi: whatya doing

Yo-sum: oh im just thinking

Roxi: yeah but what about?

*yo-sum clutching his sword he made from the broken sword they found lay with his father*

Yo-sum: oh, nothing

Roxi: yeah right tell me

Yo-sum: its nothing honestly

Roxi: no come on tell me

Suki: you okay yo-sum?

Yo-sum: Im fine and its nothing

Roxi: no come on tell us

Yo-sum: okay I was thinking about my father

*yo-sum now showing a sad expression*

Roxi: oh yo-sum im sooo sorry

*roxi gives yo-sum a hug*

Suki: yeah im sooo sorry

*suki hugs yo-sum but they dont let go*

Yo-sum: I miss him so much

Suki: I know and you know you can always talk to us o.k?

Yo-sum: yeah I know

*yo-sum lets go smiling*

Yo-sum: thanx

Roxi: yeah were always here for you so don't worry

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hirataitokyo on June 18, 2006, 1:25:30 AM

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hirataitokyoawwww how cute!!!

DarkEvilRaven on May 17, 2006, 9:17:43 AM

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DarkEvilRavenoH HEY!Nice so far,but I have a question....How do I rock if I dont have no pictures up????-_-..
haha,well anyways u rock,nice story!!!!!
DarkEvilRaven....

BlackRoseOfDeath on May 15, 2006, 12:32:46 AM

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BlackRoseOfDeathyay ^_^ thanx

Dark-boy on May 14, 2006, 10:15:58 PM

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Dark-boyYour story is quite good you are getting there

BlackRoseOfDeath on May 13, 2006, 3:05:03 AM

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BlackRoseOfDeathyay thanx ^_^

SweetDarkness on May 13, 2006, 3:00:13 AM

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SweetDarknesswow what a cool story man its awesome