Chapter 1 - AOC
Submitted August 27, 2004 Updated August 27, 2004 Status Incomplete | My first funny poem!^_^
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Chapter 1 - AOC
Chapter 1 - AOC
Woke up,
feelin' drowsey.
my arm hurts,
my head is pounding.
the alarm is ringin',
on and on.
I'm at wits end,
They're almost gone.
I can hear my sister
playing downstairs,
the smell of pankakes
sifting through the air.
So I force myself up,
but I'm too lazy.
I can't function right,
I'm downright hazy!
Turn off my alarm,
I'm going back to bed.
Then I woke up-
I felt my mom hit my head...
...OWW...
feelin' drowsey.
my arm hurts,
my head is pounding.
the alarm is ringin',
on and on.
I'm at wits end,
They're almost gone.
I can hear my sister
playing downstairs,
the smell of pankakes
sifting through the air.
So I force myself up,
but I'm too lazy.
I can't function right,
I'm downright hazy!
Turn off my alarm,
I'm going back to bed.
Then I woke up-
I felt my mom hit my head...
...OWW...
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Wet_Noodles on December 27, 2005, 9:54:26 AM
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It was awesome- I can relate!Chibichan on November 1, 2005, 10:11:01 AM
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don't worry, we all hate alarms. ^_^LizzardQueeng on July 7, 2005, 11:35:28 PM
Lmao! Funny lil' poem of spiffiness XDBlizzardComics on May 9, 2005, 11:46:46 AM
Thank you^^Fujiko on May 2, 2005, 6:20:23 AM
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Damn funny poem... ha ha ha... my moms never hit my head (my mom wouldnt touch me head)well keep it up strawberry_kissez on March 11, 2005, 7:58:04 AM
lol good job!Enjeru on October 30, 2004, 4:30:46 PM
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ALARM CLOCKS ARE EVIL!!!!!!!! Not like Muffins! Muffins are like corn........ and corn is NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE! YAY!!!!!!!! *Ish completely off topic* Umm....... yeah. Good poem!tHe_dOOna on September 10, 2004, 8:45:27 AM
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woah!! @.@ my mom did dat to me once...she smacked me upside my head...ouchiez...i can still feel the pain!! i luv dish one...Rune on September 8, 2004, 9:10:56 AM
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great poem. i really like it. i wish i could write a poem like that but i suck at writing. Anyways great poem.BloodySunAngel on September 1, 2004, 4:29:24 PM
lol. sounds like DFF! ( Dysfuntional family fun )see, if i were you i wouldn't have shut off my alarm clock, i would've thrown it across the room... then stomped on it... the went back to bed... >> good reason i don't have an alarm clock. it's just a waste of moneu. *favorites*
Inu-Tasha on August 30, 2004, 4:48:11 PM
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LMFAO! i love it!Yin-Yang15 on August 29, 2004, 11:49:18 AM
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Hey there! This is so funny! Well..I...Uh allready knew that seeing as I just saw you last week. Anywho, I'm just glad you got an account!^_^