Chapter 1 - BL
Submitted August 30, 2004 Updated August 30, 2004 Status Incomplete | Probably my darkest poem.ITH AWTHOM!!!
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Chapter 1 - BL
Chapter 1 - BL
From uninspired,
To inspiration,
To be loyal,
Or to deceive,
It's all the same
When you turn the light out...
I asked a question,
You stayed silent,
So speak up
Because I can't always
Read your mind...
You gave directions
To the end,
But I got lost
Inside my head.
What may seem simple,
May not always be so simple
To ME, the uninformed...
Don't
Hide from the light,
Let
Our hearts blend.
And yet it's all the same
When you finally close the door...
To inspiration,
To be loyal,
Or to deceive,
It's all the same
When you turn the light out...
I asked a question,
You stayed silent,
So speak up
Because I can't always
Read your mind...
You gave directions
To the end,
But I got lost
Inside my head.
What may seem simple,
May not always be so simple
To ME, the uninformed...
Don't
Hide from the light,
Let
Our hearts blend.
And yet it's all the same
When you finally close the door...
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LizzardQueeng on July 7, 2005, 11:22:57 PM
Amazing, I love how you leave your poems "hanging" almost, It's really great^^ *faves* I don't know how you come up with this stuff, but it's great.BlizzardComics on May 9, 2005, 11:49:41 AM
lol wh00t!How about adding one of those great artists to you faves list?huh?How bout it?*nudges you with elbow*You should consider that*wink*lol
jk
ILoveAang on April 16, 2005, 9:42:56 AM
ILoveAang on
yet another peom i will be adding to my favorites.....Enjeru on November 12, 2004, 2:44:28 PM
Enjeru on
WOWIE!!!!!!! So good! Thats all there is to it! I can't rhyme at all which is why I do free verse. *Gives Blizz another Muffin* Keep Going! *Cheers Blizz on* GO! GO! GO! GO! GO! GO! GO! GO! GO! GO!...JustThisOneGirl on September 25, 2004, 3:29:27 AM
I really like this. It's super good!Yin-Yang15 on September 8, 2004, 10:05:31 AM
Yin-Yang15 on
Heh heh...My first comment wasn't a compliment like it should have been '_'6 sorry,This poem is so awesome...I don't know how you do it...amazing...BrokenDeathAngel on September 2, 2004, 4:21:11 PM
Awesome!BloodySunAngel on September 1, 2004, 4:27:18 PM
this poem reminds me of the time kinky glued my hand to the wall, shut the doors and turned off all the lights. *shudder*kinda gloomy. i like it. *favorites*
sheyla on August 30, 2004, 7:24:10 AM
sheyla on
Oh, it´s so good, I love it, add to favs! Keep it up!Yin-Yang15 on August 30, 2004, 6:38:39 AM
Yin-Yang15 on
This is the re-done version of "roletape" you were telling me about isn't it?