Chapter 1 - Visions of the Past
Submitted November 10, 2007 Updated February 15, 2009 Status Incomplete | What would happen if you didn't know your father or you mother and your grandparents are supposedly dead? This is the story of Alaphonse and Noel, grandchildren of the two most dangerous beings on earth, and Tidus, Alaphonse's demon half-brother.
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Chapter 1 - Visions of the Past
Chapter 1 - Visions of the Past
**flashback**
???: Oh wow Mom! She's adorable!
???: I knew you would say that.
???: What's her name?
???: Noel Jane Fenix.
???: I wish my name was that cool!
**another flashback**
Noel: Hey, Al? When are Mom and Dad going to get home? I need help with my math homework.
Al: Not sure. Go away.
Noel: Jeez! Teenagers are boring!
*doorbell rang*
Al: I'll get it!
Noel opened the door to a man looking down at his feet.
Al: Can we help you?
???: I'm so sorry...
Al: What?
???: Your parents... died in a freak car accident.
Noel: What...
Noel started crying, and Alaphonse closes the door.
Al: How in the world...
Noel reached up for a hug, and Alaphonse hugged her.
Al: No...
**flashback ends**
Al: NOOOOOO!
Alaphonse wakes with a start and sits upright in bed.
Al: I have got to forget about that!
Alaphonse feels his forehead and notices that he is sweating very hard. He tries to calm himself down when Noel walks in.
Noel:Are you ok Alaphonse?
Al: Yeah why?
Noel:Then why are you sweating?
Al: Its about 70 degrees in here and I've been under a cover. Why do you think?
Noel:Ok. I just came to tell you that we are out of cereal.
Al: *sighs* What kind do you want?
Noel:Cinnamon Toast Crunch!
Al: Alright just let me get dressed first.
Neol: Good point!
Noel leaves and Alaphonse goes and slips on a pair of jeans and a red T-shirt with a low-cut neck. Then he goes and gets his shoes on and looks in the mirror at his total messed up quills.
Al: Holy crap!
Alaphonse makes a failed attempt at combing his quills out.
Al: D**m it!
Noel: We're also out of Orange Juice!
Al: Do you think I give a d**m?
Noel: Jeez! You keep cursing like that and people will mistake you for Shadow!
Alphonse's eyes then begin to turn into green cat eyes.
Al: DO NOT MENTION EITHER OF OUR GRANDPARENTS!!
Noel: My god! Your even worse than Magneto!
Alaphonse calms down, realizing that he's about to go psycho on her.
Al: Who the h**l is Magneto?
Noel: Someone in a story i'm reading on Fanart-Central.
Al: Ok...? Do you want me to go get groceries or not?
Noel:YES!
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Alaphonse walks through the park in between the store and his house. Suddenly, an intense pain shoots through his skull. Alaphonse collapses onto one knee, trying to hold himself up. Then a blurred image flashes into focus.
****
???:All I want to do is be more like me and be less like YOU!
???:Wait! Stop! GAAH!
One of the blurred figures stabs the other through the stomach with his hand.
???:...i'm not...who you think...i am...
???:Than who are you- oh no...
Then, the first figure kneels over whoever he just stabbed and start crying.
???:I'm so sorry...father...Ra-
***
Alaphonse came back to consciousness with a painful jolt.
Al: What the f**k was that about?
Alaphonse was confused that the last word was apparently cut off, so he resumed walking home.
And this is where I leave you!
???: Oh wow Mom! She's adorable!
???: I knew you would say that.
???: What's her name?
???: Noel Jane Fenix.
???: I wish my name was that cool!
**another flashback**
Noel: Hey, Al? When are Mom and Dad going to get home? I need help with my math homework.
Al: Not sure. Go away.
Noel: Jeez! Teenagers are boring!
*doorbell rang*
Al: I'll get it!
Noel opened the door to a man looking down at his feet.
Al: Can we help you?
???: I'm so sorry...
Al: What?
???: Your parents... died in a freak car accident.
Noel: What...
Noel started crying, and Alaphonse closes the door.
Al: How in the world...
Noel reached up for a hug, and Alaphonse hugged her.
Al: No...
**flashback ends**
Al: NOOOOOO!
Alaphonse wakes with a start and sits upright in bed.
Al: I have got to forget about that!
Alaphonse feels his forehead and notices that he is sweating very hard. He tries to calm himself down when Noel walks in.
Noel:Are you ok Alaphonse?
Al: Yeah why?
Noel:Then why are you sweating?
Al: Its about 70 degrees in here and I've been under a cover. Why do you think?
Noel:Ok. I just came to tell you that we are out of cereal.
Al: *sighs* What kind do you want?
Noel:Cinnamon Toast Crunch!
Al: Alright just let me get dressed first.
Neol: Good point!
Noel leaves and Alaphonse goes and slips on a pair of jeans and a red T-shirt with a low-cut neck. Then he goes and gets his shoes on and looks in the mirror at his total messed up quills.
Al: Holy crap!
Alaphonse makes a failed attempt at combing his quills out.
Al: D**m it!
Noel: We're also out of Orange Juice!
Al: Do you think I give a d**m?
Noel: Jeez! You keep cursing like that and people will mistake you for Shadow!
Alphonse's eyes then begin to turn into green cat eyes.
Al: DO NOT MENTION EITHER OF OUR GRANDPARENTS!!
Noel: My god! Your even worse than Magneto!
Alaphonse calms down, realizing that he's about to go psycho on her.
Al: Who the h**l is Magneto?
Noel: Someone in a story i'm reading on Fanart-Central.
Al: Ok...? Do you want me to go get groceries or not?
Noel:YES!
***************************************************************************
Alaphonse walks through the park in between the store and his house. Suddenly, an intense pain shoots through his skull. Alaphonse collapses onto one knee, trying to hold himself up. Then a blurred image flashes into focus.
****
???:All I want to do is be more like me and be less like YOU!
???:Wait! Stop! GAAH!
One of the blurred figures stabs the other through the stomach with his hand.
???:...i'm not...who you think...i am...
???:Than who are you- oh no...
Then, the first figure kneels over whoever he just stabbed and start crying.
???:I'm so sorry...father...Ra-
***
Alaphonse came back to consciousness with a painful jolt.
Al: What the f**k was that about?
Alaphonse was confused that the last word was apparently cut off, so he resumed walking home.
And this is where I leave you!
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sNaPxdRaGoN on November 13, 2007, 8:10:12 AM
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BloodfangTheFox on November 13, 2007, 8:27:40 AM
Oooooookaaaaaay..... weirdo.